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9．假如你是李华，最近你的美国友Bob看到共享单车（shared-bike）非常流行但是也有各种乱象的新闻，来e-mail询问你共享单车在中国的现状．你给他写一封回信，介绍共享单车并分享你的看法，回信包含以下要点：
1．共享单车的好处（两点） 2．共享单车的乱象（两种） 3．你对共享单车的看法
注意：1词数100左右    2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅．
3．开头已为你写好，不计入总词数．
Dear Bob，
How's everything going？In your last letter you were asking about the current situation of the Bike-sharing Program in ChinaI'm writing to tell you something about it and share some of my ideas with you．
Undoubtedly，the Bike-sharing Program can bring lots of benefits．To begin with，riding a bike is not only economic but also time-saving，especially when your destination is not far away．（高分句型一）What's more，the program makes contributions to reducing air pollution．
However，there is also some disturbing news connected with it．Some shared-bikes are parked everywhere，making the city roads messy and dangerous．（高分句型二）Worse still，some shared-bikes have been damaged，stolen or even burnt．
As far as I'm concerned，as long as people park the bikes in the right places and obey the traffic rules，I'm definitely in favor of such a program．（高分句型三）I'm looking forward to hearing from you．
Yours．

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息针对美国笔友Bob对成都共享单车（shared-bike）非常流行但是也有各种乱象的新闻来e-mail询问你成都共享单车的现状．你给Bob写一封回信，介绍共享单车并分享你的看法，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：共享单车的好处（两点）；共享单车的乱象（两种）；你对共享单车的看法 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：Undoubtedly毋庸置疑；To begin with首先；What's more而且；makes contribution to 有助于；However然而；Worse still更糟的是；As far as I'm concerned以我的观点来看；as long as只要；
To begin with，riding a bike is not only economic but also time-saving，especially when your destination is not far away．（高分句型一）
Some shared-bikes are parked everywhere，making the city roads messy and dangerous．（高分句型二）
 As far as I'm concerned，as long as people park the bikes in the right places and obey the traffic rules，I'm definitely in favor of such a program．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Bob，
      How's everything going？In your last letter you were asking about the current situation of the Bike-sharing Program in China．I'm writing to tell you something about it and share some of my ideas with you．
      Undoubtedly，the Bike-sharing Program can bring lots of benefits．To begin with，riding a bike is not only economic but also time-saving，especially when your destination is not far away．（高分句型一）What's more，the program makes contributions to reducing air pollution．
      However，there is also some disturbing news connected with it．Some shared-bikes are parked everywhere，making the city roads messy and dangerous．（高分句型二）Worse still，some shared-bikes have been damaged，stolen or even burnt．
      As far as I'm concerned，as long as people park the bikes in the right places and obey the traffic rules，I'm definitely in favor of such a program．（高分句型三）I'm looking forward to hearing from you．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                             Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                             Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．

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A．The city is full of tourists．
B．The rest live on the mainland．
C．The cost of living is also lower，in Venice．
D．Water gets into the buildings，and destroys the walls．
E．It attracts thousands of beach-goers throughout the summer holidays．
F．The central location of Venice is the Piazza San Marco or Saint Mark's Square．
G．Over the centuries the Mediterranean town has been regularly flooded by tides．
20．假如你是美国某校高二学生刘凯，因为父母的原因不得不离开原来的学校，回中国学习．事发突然，没来得及跟班上的同学和老师当面道别．你决定在班级群里发贴．内容包括：
1．道歉并解释原因．
2．回顾高中生活，对老师和同学表达谢意．
注意：
1．词数100左右，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
2．开头语和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数．
3．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校．
Dear teachers and classmates，
I am so sorry for not saying good-bye to you，but I have to leave for China to study because of my parents'sudden job change．
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Best wishes!
Yours sincerely，
Liu Kai
17．Chen Yifan，the student from a local senior high school，hit a BMW car parking along the street when he was passing by on a bicycle on February 4，leaving the rearview mirror broken and several scratches over the body of the car．
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Chen Yifan and his mom decided to pay all they could afford for compensation after Chen accidentally bumped into a parked BMW．Moved by his deed，the car owner declined and offered to sponsor Chen's education．
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B．The opening ceremony of a sports meeting．
C．A presentation of college diplomas．
D．A US college's farewell party．
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A．She was one of the graduates．
B．She was a foreign exchange student．
C．She was excited to receive her diploma．
D．She felt it great to be at the ceremony．
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a．Diplomas were presented to graduates．
b．Students gave farewell speeches．
c．The US national anthem was played．
d．The principal gave a short，warm speech．
e．Seniors went into the stadium．
A．b，c，a，d，e          B．c，d，b，e，a            C．d，b，e，a，c         D．e，d，c，b，a
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要点如下：
1．对他在英语学习方面有困难表示关心，并愿意提供帮助．
2．给他提出建议：①每天背单词、短语，丰富词汇量；②多听英语录音或光盘，模仿准确的语音语调，提高听力；③课外多阅读，提高阅读能力；
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注意：
1．书信必须包括以上提供的内容要点，可以适当增加细节，使内容连贯；
2．词数：词数100左右；
参考词汇：记住：memorize；丰富：enrich；语调：intonation
Dear Wang Qiang，
I'm glad to hear from you．I'm very sorry that you have some trouble with your English．Now let me give you some advice on how to learn English．
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I hope that my advice can help you．I also hope that you will make progress in English and catch up with your classmates soon．（高分句型三）
Best wishes for you!
Yours
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●Realize that feeling homesick is 100 percent normal．
Almost everyone experiences homesickness when moving to a new place-some people might just be better at hiding it．（32）DHomesickness is a normal and evolutionarily healthy reaction．
●Make connections with new people in comfortable settings．
Feeling homesick when separated from loved ones motivates people to be with those supportive people．（33）GWhen making new connections，it's best to stick to the style that works for you in order to ease homesickness．
●（34）B
This point is vital and also one of the hardest to accomplish．Self-compassion is loving yourself just as you love the ones you care about．The most important step in practicing self-compassion is substituting negative，critical and，sometimes，automatic thoughts about yourself with thoughts that are more supportive and kind．
●Keep tabs on your negativity．
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A．Learn to help others．
B．Practice self-compassion．
C．Being homesick is abnormal．
D．Being homesick is not a sign of personal shortcoming．
E．We gathered a few psychologist-backed tips to help ease homesickness．
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G．But keep in mind that everyone is different when it comes to forming those new relationships．
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