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4．假如你是李华，最近你班同学就中学生是否可以带手机上学进行了讨论．请你根据下列信息，给校长写一封信，客观地介绍你班讨论的情况．
70%的学生认为30%的学生认为
1．没有必要带手机；
2．带手机会分散学习精力，上课开机影响极坏；
3．学生用手机会增加家长经济负担．		1．学生可以带手机上学，但上课要关机；
2．学生带手机可以方便联系；
3．信息时代的交流工具，不应禁止．
注意：
1．词数100字左右
2．信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数．
家长经济负担：parents'economic burden  信息时代 information times
禁止  ban…from…关机 turn phones off
Dear principal，
I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether a mobile phone should be brought to school．                                                   

分析 本篇书面表达要求给校长写一封信汇报班级就"中学生是否可以带手机"进行的讨论结果．所以文章在开头首先要讲明写信的目的．其次，在介绍学生们的观点看法时要用一般现在时；文章要求客观地介绍讨论结果，所以文中要避免出现表达个人观点态度的词．此外，在陈述要点时要加入适当的连接词以使语句通顺，内容连贯，结构紧凑．
【亮点说明】文章要点全面，结构清晰，开头表明写信的目的，然后分别介绍了两种不同的观点．文中插入语To tell you the truth和Furthermore、Besides、However等表示递进、转折意义副词的使用使文章上下文衔接自然，紧凑，而且文中原因状语从句．Because with them we may not fix our attention to thelessons、条件状语从句If the phone is no t turned off by chance；on condition that we turned off them in class、宾语从句thatwe shouldn't bring mobile phones to school的使用也显示了作者对语言的熟练运用能力．此外With a mobile phone等短语也避免了句式的单一．总之，这是一篇优秀的范文

解答 Dear principle，
    I am writing to tell you about the discussion we haveabout whether a mobile phone should be brought to school．
    To tell you the truth，the students in ourclass have different opinions．（高分句型）About 70% of the students think that we shouldn't bring mobile phones to school．Because with them we may not fix our attentionto the lessons．If the phone is no t turned off by chance and the ringing will destroy the class．（高分句型）Furthermore，using mobile phones will add to ourparents'economic burdens．However，about 30%of the students think we canbring phones to school on condition that we turned off them in class．（高分句型）With amobile phone it is convenient for us to keep in touch with our parents and friends．（高分句型）Besides，the mobile phone is a tool ofinformation times．It may not be right to ban students from carrying mobilephones．
                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours sincerely
                                                                                                                                                                                            LiHua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．

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