题目内容
5.请根据下列表格内容描述你在刚结束的暑假中的活动,适当增加细节,字数不少于60个.1、参加了一个短期英语课程,练习了听、说; |
2、给来北京度假的一些外国朋友当导游,参观名胜,品尝传统小吃,欣赏京剧; |
3、你的感受 |
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分析 写这类作文注意不要遗漏表格里的信息.在描述事件的时候,可以按照时间顺序讲述,也可以采用别的方法.同时注意上下文的衔接,灵活使用过渡词以及各种句型,长短句结合,搭配适当的过渡词使文章衔接自然.可第二段用两到三句话发表关于这个事件的个人看法.要把表格中的要点信心扩展成一个个完整的句子,然后根据文章的中心话题和要求,把这些要点连句成文.本文可以使用了一些重要的语法知识:现在分词作状语practicing listening and speaking there,定语从句some of my foreign friends who came to Beijing for their holiday等,语法知识使用得当,叙事清晰;注意使用了一般过去时,保持了全文时态的一致,对时态有较好的把握;注意使用at the beginning of,then,such as等来衔接句子和段落,表示事情发生的时间顺序,使作文更有条理,做到了行文连贯.使用了很多固定短语:act as,have a good time,not only…but also等,使作文内容更加充实.
亮点句型一:Then I acted as a tour guide for some of my foreign friends who came to Beijing for their holiday and showed them around some places of interest,such as the Forbidden City,the Great Wall and Summer Palace.然后,我作为一个导游,我的一些外国朋友来到北京度假,并带他们参观了一些景点,如紫禁城,长城和颐和园. 本句中who came to Beijing for their holiday 是一个定语从句,修饰名词friends;such as表示举例,意为"例如,诸如此类的,像…那样的".
亮点句型二:.I not only introduced our culture and custom to foreigners but also practiced my English as well.我不仅向外国人介绍了我们的风俗习惯,而且还练习了我的英语.not only …but also 应连接两个相对称的并列成分,此处并列的是谓语动词introduced和practiced.
解答 At the beginning of my summer vacation,I attended a short-term English course,practicing listening and speaking there.Then I acted as a tour guide for some of my foreign friends who came to Beijing for their holiday and showed them around some places of interest,such as the Forbidden City,the Great Wall and Summer Palace.(亮点句型一)We also tasted some traditional snacks and enjoyed Beijing opera.All of us had a very good time.I not only introduced our culture and custom to foreigners but also practiced my English as well.【描述活动内容】(亮点句型二)What a colorful and meaningful summer holiday!【个人感受】
点评 本文属于提纲作文,动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题.平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果.
70%的学生认为 | 30%的学生认为 |
1.没有必要带手机; 2.带手机会分散学习精力,上课开机影响极坏; 3.学生用手机会增加家长经济负担. | 1.学生可以带手机上学,但上课要关机; 2.学生带手机可以方便联系; 3.信息时代的交流工具,不应禁止. |
1.词数100字左右
2.信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数.
家长经济负担:parents'economic burden 信息时代 information times
禁止 ban…from…关机 turn phones off
Dear principal,
I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether a mobile phone should be brought to school.
A.A shocking report B.Solution to the terrifying result C.What is global warming? D.Many shocking things were found. E.Greater danger of extinction F.A careful analysis biologically |
The earth is getting warmer.People burn coal,oil and gas and this produces carbon dioxide,methane (沼气) and nitrous oxide.These gases,called"greenhouse gases",prevent the heat of the sun from leaving the earth's upper atmosphere and this makes the earth warmer.
82.A
A few weeks ago a group of scientists produced a report about global warming and the natural world.They wanted to find out if global warming was dangerous for plants and animals.According to what they found,the scientists say that during the next 50years about 25% of land animals and plants will become extinct.More than a million plant and animal species will be extinct by 2050.
83.B
More than 10% of all plants and animals will become extinct.It is too late to save many plants and animals because of the greenhouse gases that are already in the atmosphere.But the scientists say if we control greenhouse gases now,we could save many more plants and animals from extinction.
84.F
The scientists studied some regions of the world with a very rich biology.These were Europe,Australia,Central and South America,and South Africa.Their studies showed that species living in mountainous areas had a better chance of survival because they could move uphill,to get cooler.In flat areas,such as deserts,plants and animals would have to move a very long distance to get cooler,so they are in greater danger of extinction.
85.D
The scientists found that half of the 24species of butterflies they studied in Australia would soon become extinct.60% of the species in the Kruger National Park in South Africa would also die out,and more than 100% of the 300South Africa plant species they studied would also become extinct.One of the plants in danger of extinction is the national flower of South Africa,the King Protea.They studied 163tree species in the Cerrado region of Brazil and found that 70would become extinct.Many of the plants and trees that live in the region live nowhere else in the world.In Mexico,they studied 1,870species and found that more than 30% of these were in danger of extinction.
A. | 1990s; sixties | B. | the 1990s; their sixties | ||
C. | the 1990s; the sixties | D. | 1990s; their sixties |
烦恼 | 解决办法 |
外形不美 | 不必在意,关注内在美 |
朋友少,不被他人理解 | 多参加活动,多与别人交流 |
与父母有代沟,经常吵架 | 加强沟通,互相理解 |
学习成绩不好,压力大 | ? |
1.开头已写好,不记入词数;
2.语言通顺,结构严谨.
参考词汇:内在美 inner beauty 除去 get rid of
Boys and girls:
We high school students do have some growing pains,but we can get rid of them correctly and wisely. .
That's all.Thank you.
报纸的优点 | 学生最喜爱栏目 | 两点建议 |
①了解很多信息,如音乐、文学、教育、体育、科技等. ②经常阅读该报,增长知识、拓宽视野、提高英语水平. | ①名称:Help ②原因:帮助解决学习和生活上的问题. | ①开设环境教育栏目,介绍环境保护方面的知识. ②… |
①词数120左右.
②短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数.
③参考词汇:文学literature;拓宽视野broaden one's horizons;栏目column
Teens is very popular among students.From this newspaper students can…
I hope Teens will be much more helpful to the students in the future!
80%支持 | 1、增强体质; 2、培养合作精神; 3、学会如何面对胜负; |
20%反对 | 1、并非是强身健体的唯一形式; 2、容易造成伤害; 3、影响学习; |
你的看法 | (至少两点理由)… |
2.字数150左右.文章开头已经给出,不计入总词数.
3.作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名.
注:增强体质 build up one's strength
Some people like sport while others not in our life.Recently,our school conducted a survey about whether the school should hold a sports meeting or not,students'opinions are divided on the topic.