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5.请根据下列表格内容描述你在刚结束的暑假中的活动,适当增加细节,字数不少于60个.
1、参加了一个短期英语课程,练习了听、说;
2、给来北京度假的一些外国朋友当导游,参观名胜,品尝传统小吃,欣赏京剧;
3、你的感受
提示词:短期英语课程 a short-term English course
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分析 写这类作文注意不要遗漏表格里的信息.在描述事件的时候,可以按照时间顺序讲述,也可以采用别的方法.同时注意上下文的衔接,灵活使用过渡词以及各种句型,长短句结合,搭配适当的过渡词使文章衔接自然.可第二段用两到三句话发表关于这个事件的个人看法.要把表格中的要点信心扩展成一个个完整的句子,然后根据文章的中心话题和要求,把这些要点连句成文.本文可以使用了一些重要的语法知识:现在分词作状语practicing listening and speaking there,定语从句some of my foreign friends who came to Beijing for their holiday等,语法知识使用得当,叙事清晰;注意使用了一般过去时,保持了全文时态的一致,对时态有较好的把握;注意使用at the beginning of,then,such as等来衔接句子和段落,表示事情发生的时间顺序,使作文更有条理,做到了行文连贯.使用了很多固定短语:act as,have a good time,not only…but also等,使作文内容更加充实.
亮点句型一:Then I acted as a tour guide for some of my foreign friends who came to Beijing for their holiday and showed them around some places of interest,such as the Forbidden City,the Great Wall and Summer Palace.然后,我作为一个导游,我的一些外国朋友来到北京度假,并带他们参观了一些景点,如紫禁城,长城和颐和园. 本句中who came to Beijing for their holiday 是一个定语从句,修饰名词friends;such as表示举例,意为"例如,诸如此类的,像…那样的".
亮点句型二:.I not only introduced our culture and custom to foreigners but also practiced my English as well.我不仅向外国人介绍了我们的风俗习惯,而且还练习了我的英语.not only …but also 应连接两个相对称的并列成分,此处并列的是谓语动词introduced和practiced.

解答 At the beginning of my summer vacation,I attended a short-term English course,practicing listening and speaking there.Then I acted as a tour guide for some of my foreign friends who came to Beijing for their holiday and showed them around some places of interest,such as the Forbidden City,the Great Wall and Summer Palace.(亮点句型一)We also tasted some traditional snacks and enjoyed Beijing opera.All of us had a very good time.I not only introduced our culture and custom to foreigners but also practiced my English as well.【描述活动内容】(亮点句型二)What a colorful and meaningful summer holiday!【个人感受】

点评 本文属于提纲作文,动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题.平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果.

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