题目内容
15.在一次英语课上,你们班就"发展经济与保护环境的关系问题"进行了热烈的讨论,讨论结果见下表.请根据表格所提供信息,写一篇不少于150 词的英语短文.注意:1.开头为你写好,不计入总词数,请接着往下写.
2.参考词汇:不可避免的unavoidable 副产品by-product
以------为代价at the cost of/sacrifice---for---
60%同学的观点 | 经济发展不应以环境为代价.忽视环境而发展经济将对环境造成破坏,工业和城市的迅速发展造成农田土地减少就是例证. |
40%同学的观点 | 发展经济必然带来环境问题,环境问题是经济发展的副产品,等以后有了钱和时间再来解决. |
你的观点 | ----- |
分析 本题是一篇材料作文.要求向英文报社写一封信,介绍讨论发展与环保的结果.学生比较熟悉书信格式,作文要点已经给出.可以分为三段,第一段支持环保;第二段支持发展;第三段给出自己的观点.作文必须包含所有要点,所给参考词汇必须用上,否则会扣分.注意句与句之间,段与段之间的衔接要自然.
【亮点说明】范文使用了第一人称,比较有礼貌.范文条理清晰,逻辑明确,很好的表达了讨论的结果和自己的观点.I am writing to tell you about…是写信常用的开头格式.范文交替使用believe和think来表达观点,避免了重复.范文使用For example,However等来连接前后文,使文章显得自然流畅;范文使用了较多的语法知识,像被动语态are largely caused by和be dealt with;定语从句we've had about the relationship…和which are unavoidable;固定句型think it unnecessary to…和provide…for sb及The purpose of…is to;宾语从句believe that…;时间状语从句when we have the time and money;范文使用never和only来加强语气,更能突出作者的态度和观点;范文也使用了短语because of和aim at等,使文章内容充实.
解答 Once in an English lesson,we had a heated discussion about the relationship between economic development and environment protection. 60% students believe we should never sacrifice environment for economy.They think the present environmental problems are largely caused by rapid economic development.(高分句型) For example,farmable land is decreasing because of the industrial development and the development of cities.(高分句型)
However,40%students think it unnecessary to consider environmental problems now and economic development comes first.They believe that environmental problems are only the by-products of economic development,which are unavoidable.(高分句型)They can be dealt with later when we have the time and money.
I think the second view is completely wrong.The purpose of economic development is to provide a comfortable and happy life for our people.We should aim at sustainable development and a balance between the two.(0高分句型)
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
For(正方) | Against(反方) |
•the task of students | •busy preparing for exams |
•improve our studies | •do harm to our health |
•hope of the parents | •no time to do other things |
•the Entrance Exam | •not the only way to improve studies |
•… | •… |
(1)意见可参考上述要点,并适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(2)词数:100词左右,开头已写好,不计入总词数.
Dear editor,
In our school we nearly have two examinations each week.
A reader.
A. | as three big as | B. | three times as big as | ||
C. | as big as three times | D. | as big three times as |
优点 | 缺点 | |
呆在家中 | 花费少、舒适方便 | 不能亲身了解外界 |
外出旅游 | 增长知识、开阔眼界 | 花费多、旅途不便 |
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
3.参考词汇:眼界-horizon(或view)
70%的学生认为 | 30%的学生认为 |
1.没有必要带手机; 2.带手机会分散学习精力,上课开机影响极坏; 3.学生用手机会增加家长经济负担. | 1.学生可以带手机上学,但上课要关机; 2.学生带手机可以方便联系; 3.信息时代的交流工具,不应禁止. |
1.词数100字左右
2.信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数.
家长经济负担:parents'economic burden 信息时代 information times
禁止 ban…from…关机 turn phones off
Dear principal,
I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether a mobile phone should be brought to school.
A.A shocking report B.Solution to the terrifying result C.What is global warming? D.Many shocking things were found. E.Greater danger of extinction F.A careful analysis biologically |
The earth is getting warmer.People burn coal,oil and gas and this produces carbon dioxide,methane (沼气) and nitrous oxide.These gases,called"greenhouse gases",prevent the heat of the sun from leaving the earth's upper atmosphere and this makes the earth warmer.
82.A
A few weeks ago a group of scientists produced a report about global warming and the natural world.They wanted to find out if global warming was dangerous for plants and animals.According to what they found,the scientists say that during the next 50years about 25% of land animals and plants will become extinct.More than a million plant and animal species will be extinct by 2050.
83.B
More than 10% of all plants and animals will become extinct.It is too late to save many plants and animals because of the greenhouse gases that are already in the atmosphere.But the scientists say if we control greenhouse gases now,we could save many more plants and animals from extinction.
84.F
The scientists studied some regions of the world with a very rich biology.These were Europe,Australia,Central and South America,and South Africa.Their studies showed that species living in mountainous areas had a better chance of survival because they could move uphill,to get cooler.In flat areas,such as deserts,plants and animals would have to move a very long distance to get cooler,so they are in greater danger of extinction.
85.D
The scientists found that half of the 24species of butterflies they studied in Australia would soon become extinct.60% of the species in the Kruger National Park in South Africa would also die out,and more than 100% of the 300South Africa plant species they studied would also become extinct.One of the plants in danger of extinction is the national flower of South Africa,the King Protea.They studied 163tree species in the Cerrado region of Brazil and found that 70would become extinct.Many of the plants and trees that live in the region live nowhere else in the world.In Mexico,they studied 1,870species and found that more than 30% of these were in danger of extinction.