题目内容
【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was March 8th, Women’s Day. I decided to do something for my mom and give her a surprise.
Immediately after school, I went to the supermarket, when I bought plenty of vegetables, fish and meat. As soon as I arrived home, I started to prepare the dinner for Mom. It was the first time that I had cooked something on my own. Not knowing the exactly process to cook. I read some recipes first. Keep what I had learned in mind, I got down with cooking. Almost an hour later, three simple but delicious dishes were ready on the table.
Since Mom couldn’t get home until thirty minutes later, I started to do some cleaning. It was not difficult for me. Mopping thoroughly, the floor was quite clean.
No sooner had everything been ready Mom came back. I couldn’t wait to show what I had been done for her. A big smile with both surprise and satisfy spread on Mom’s face when she found the hearty(丰盛的) dinner and the tidy room. At that moment, pride rose from a bottom of my heart. Although she fell a little tired, everything was worthwhile.
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【解析】这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了作者为妈妈庆祝三八节的故事。
第一处:考查定语从句。句意:放学之后我立刻去了超市,在那里我购买了很多的蔬菜,鱼和肉。先行词为supermarket,在从句中做地点状语,故应该用关系副词where。
第二处:考查形容词。修饰process名词应该用形容词exact,而不用副词。
第三处:考查非谓语。句意:把我在书上学的东西牢记心间之后我就开始进行烹饪。此句谓语动词为got,因此keep 应该是用非谓语,I 与keep之间为主动关系,所以应该用keeping。
第四处:考查固定短语。get down to doing“开始着手做某事”。故把with改为to。
第五处:考查非谓语。句意:彻底打扫之后,地板变得非常干净。此句谓语为was,所以mop 用非谓语,mop 与the floor 之间为被动关系,所以要用过去分词。
第六处:考查固定句型。no sooner… than…一……就……。句意:没等一切准备就绪,妈妈就回来了。故Mom前加than。
第七处:考查语态。句意:我迫不及待的为她展示我做的一切。“我”与“做”是主动关系,所以had been done错误,要去掉been。
第八处:考查名词。句意:妈妈脸上露出吃惊和满意的笑容。both … and…表前后并列,词性一致,surprise为名词,因此satisfaction也用名词。
第九处:考查冠词。句意:那时候,自豪之情从自己心底油然而生。自己心底为特指,应该用the,不用a。
第十处:考查代词。根据前后语境可知,此处表示“我虽然有点累,但感觉一切都值得”。是我不是她,所以用I 不用she。