[题目]假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词,2. 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last Saturday I took bike trip to the nature park together with three of my friends in the breeze (微风), there we went for sighting. In the forest, we saw a number of plant and knew a lot about them. And then we go to a patch of grass that was full of wild flowers. We lay in the sun quietly, enjoyed the fresh air. The sight was very amazing that we didn’t want to leave. We talked about our experiences happy and played several childhood games. Later, we had photos taken together and rode back to home.

It was really an unforgettable weekend because they learned a lot about plants. With addition, we relaxed ourselves by enjoying the beauty of nature.

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【解析】去旅行，固定短语用take a trip。

定语从句。在自然公园里我们去观光。Where 引导定语从句，在从句中做地点状语，而there 不起连词作用。

Plant可数，前面被a number of 修饰，应该用复数。

此处句时态不对。因为第一句说了是上周六的事情，所以应该用过去式。

此处enjoy 做伴随状语，与we 是主动关系，所以用现在分词。

此处考查so。。。。that。。。表示景色如此惊人，以至于我们不想离开。

此处用副词修饰动词talk，表示谈的愉快。

Home 为副词，前面不需要介词to。

人称纸袋错误，文章讲述的是我们去旅游。而不是他们。

另外为固定短语in addition。

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