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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

When Molly’s father was about to work, his daughter Molly, aged 8, hand him a bag. The father was in hurry so he didn’t know what was inside. While having lunch, he took out the contents: a plastic dinosaur, a tiny sea shell and three small stone. The busy father smiled, finished eating, and sweeping the desk clean into the dustbin include Molly’s junk. This evening, Molly wanted her bag back because she had not made a note into it. I love you, Daddy. The father went to his office hurried, carrying the junk home. He asked Molly to tell her about the junk. It was turned out that everything in the bag had a story. To Molly they were not junk and treasures!

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【解析】试题分析：Molly 错把她自己的包给了父亲，在父亲看来是垃圾的东西在女儿眼里却是财富。

【1】hand→handed考查时态。此文是用过去时态描述的，故此句是用过去式，改为handed。

【2】in后加a考查固定词组。in a hurry匆忙的。

【3】stone→stones 考查名词。前面有数词three，故此处应用复数，故改为stones。

【4】sweeping→swept 考查时态。根据and连接的前后一致原则，此处改为swept。

【5】include→including 考查非谓语动词。此处应用非谓语动词作后置定语，根据与逻辑主语dustbin是主动关系，故应用including。

【6】This→That 考查代词。表示那天晚上，不是这天晚上，故改为That。

【7】hurried→hurriedly考查副词。副词修饰动词作状语，故改为hurriedly。

【8】her→him考查代词。此处是指她的父亲，故用him。

【9】was去掉 考查语态。此处是主动语态，故去掉was。

【10】and→but 考查连词。句意：对于Molly来说，它们不是垃圾而是珍宝。not...but...不是……而是……，前后词之间是转折关系，故用but。