Question

【题目】短文改错, 格式错误不得分

假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。

Life is full of ups and downs but it is never too easy to achieve success. As the old English say goes “Failure is the mother of success.” I was asked to play in a table tennis match last term. After the match, I was confident I would win. Therefore, I failed. How sadly I was! Luckily, my P.E. teacher helped me out. He told me not to lose my heart. He also helped me my skills. With his help, my confidence returned and I come up with several new idea. The next day, though I had to play against another more experience boy, I beat him. So don’t be afraid of failure. If we can deal with it well, failure can be the mother of success.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】but→and

【2】say→saying

【3】After→Before

【4】Therefore→However

【5】sadly→sad

【6】去掉my

【7】加with

【8】come→came

【9】idea→ideas

【10】experience→experienced

【解析】

试题分析：

【1】but→and考查连词。根据句意人生中充满了起伏，实现成功从来不是容易的事，可知两个简单句之间并无转折关系而是并列关系，故改为and。

【2】say→saying考查名词。Saying谚语，根据句意就像那句谚语说的“失败是成功之母”

【3】After→Before考查连词。根据句意，在比赛之前，我以为我能赢，故改为Before。

【4】Therefore→However考查连词。前句I was confident I would win和I failed之间不应该为因果关系，应该为转折关系，故改为However。

【5】sadly→sad考查形容词。此句为感叹句，sad为was的表语，副词不可做表语，根据句意我是多么伤心，此处为形容词，故改为sad。

【6】去掉my考查动词短语。lose one’s heart失去某人的心，lose heart失去信心，根据句意我的体育老师告诉我不要失去信心，故去掉my。

【7】加with考查动词。Help sb with sth表示帮助某人做某事，故加with。

【8】come→came考查动词时态。全文为一般过去时，且根据returned提示，此处应用过去式，故改为came。

【9】idea→ideas考查名词。Several表示若干个，几个，加可数名词复数。idea为可数名词，故改为ideas。

【10】experience→experienced考查形容词。experienced有经验的，more修饰形容词比较级，且此处为形容词修饰名词即boy，故改为experienced。