Question

【题目】第二届“一带一路”国际合作高峰论坛（the Belt and Road Forum for international Cooperation）将于2019年在中国举办。组委会向全球征集志愿者。假设你是李华，请按下面的要求给组委会写一封自荐信。

内容应包括：

1.个人情况：年龄、性别、学历；

2.个人条件：性格、兴趣爱好、语言能力等；

3.个人优势: 如熟悉中国传统文化，了解“一带一路”政策等;

4. 其他…

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。

Dear Sir or Madam,

Thank you for reading my letter.

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I am looking forward to receiving your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

Thank you for reading my letter. As the Belt and Road Forum for International Cooperation is coming, I'd like very much to be a volunteer.

My name is Li Hua , an 18-year-old boy student in a senior middle school. I think I’m adequate to the job. First of all , I am organized, energetic, easy-going and patient, which will contribute to a good job. Secondly , a good command of Chinese and English will help me communicate with participants fluently during the forum. Most importantly, being equipped with a rich knowledge of Chinese history and especially traditional culture enables me to spread our splendid culture. Volunteering is of huge benefit to society and myself. I would be more than happy if I could be given the opportunity. I will surely spare no efforts.

I am looking forward to receiving your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本文为自荐信。自荐信是向用人单位延期谋求职位的书信。写好自荐信有4个要素。说明原因，推销自己，表达认识及表明态度，队伍资料，这是全文的核心内容。

本文内容完整，要点齐全。用词态度谦虚、语气委婉，措辞得体。既正确评价自己，突出个性特长，同时语气委婉。文中运用了大量的高级词汇如：contribute to …, be equipped with…, a good command of…, enable sb. to spread our splendid culture, be of huge benefit to, more than happy …,spare no efforts，使文章语言生动。顺序连词First of all ,.. Secondly… , Most importantly…的运用，让文章结构紧闭，叙述有条不紊。同时运用了许多高级的语法结构，如非谓语做主语：being equipped with a rich knowledge of Chinese history and especially traditional culture enables me to spread our splendid culture.还有各种复合句，如状语从句As the Belt and Road Forum for International Cooperation is coming, I'd like very much to be a volunteer.；定语从句I am organized, energetic, easy-going and patient, which will contribute to a good job.等，彰显了对英语的熟练掌握，可称的是一篇好文章。