题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom给你发了一封e-mail,告知你他将来北京度假并学习中文,希望你帮忙 推荐一所学校。请根据下表所提供的广告信息,给Tom回信。
LET'S TALK IN CHINESE
Course: Chinese for beginners
Time: February 19一March 19
Place: No. 8 Lecture Hall
Tuition (学费):2,800 RMB
For more information: www. littlestar, edu
Little Star Language School
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Tom,
I’m very happy to learn that you will be coming to Beijing to enjoy your holiday and learn Chinese in the city.
It’s my honor to recommend you a famous language school — Little Star Language School. According to the advertisement, the Chinese training course starts on Feb. 19th and lasts a month till Mar. 19th. It’s intended for beginners who are learning Chinese just like you. What’s more, the tuition of the course is reasonable. It costs only RMB 2,800 (less than $450). There are many famous language experts in the school,and the equipment is also excellent. So I believe that this school will be your best choice.
If you have any more questions, please let me know or just visit www.littlestar.edu.
Looking forward to meeting you in Beijing soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇要求考生写一封回信,向朋友推荐一所学校。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时
结构:总分
要求:
1.表达对朋友到来的欢迎
2. 向朋友推荐一所学校,包括学校名字,学费,课程,上课时间等
3. 希望受到来信
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
It’s one’s honor to do sth/ recommend /according to / last/ be intended for/ reasonable/ equipment /excellent/looking forward to
第三步:连词成句
I’m very happy to learn that you will be coming to Beijing to enjoy your holiday and learn Chinese in the city.
It’s my honor to recommend you a famous language school — Little Star Language School.
According to the advertisement, the Chinese training course starts on Feb. 19th and lasts a month till Mar. 19th.
It’s intended for beginners.
The tuition of the course is reasonable.
The equipment is also excellent.
I believe that this school will be your best choice.
If you have any more questions, please let me know or just visit www.littlestar.edu.
Looking forward to meeting you in Beijing soon.
第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词)
1. 表文章结构顺序:first of all; to start with; firstly;in the end,;at last…
2. 表并列补充关系:what’s more,;besides; in addition; as well as;last but not the least…
3. 表因果关系:because; as; so…
第五步:修改润色 (加入从句或高级词汇)