题目内容
7.假如你是李华,你的笔友Henry即将升入高一.请你写一封信件给他,提出一些高中学习和生活的建议.要点:1.合理分配学习、锻炼和休息时间;
2.与老师和同学们友好相处;
3.积极参加学校和班级的活动.
注意:1.词数:100词左右,信的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总数;
2.信件要包括以上内容,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
分析 本文是一篇提纲式命题作文,要求给你的笔友Henry即将升入高一.请你写一封信件给他,提出一些高中学习和生活的建议.命题中给出了三个写作要点,因此考生需要仔细审题,把握主题,写作中要包含所有提示要点,根据要点进行适当的合理的发挥和想象.文章要注意遣词造句,注重句式变化,调动自己多年以来的英语积累和语言储备,写出富于变化,有利于高中生活的短文.结合所给材料,可知本文主要是用一般现在时态进行叙述,人称以第二人称为主.由于是提供建议,写作中注意使用连词,或者序数词,做到上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:
Here are some suggestions for you,which may help you enjoy your school life better.(高分句型一)使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句
Only in this way can you make good use of every minute.(高分句型二)only+状语使用半倒装
Last but not least,I advise you to take an active part in societies at school,which will give you good chances to make friends and challenge yourselves.(高分句型三)句中使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句
解答 Here are some suggestions for you,which may help you enjoy your school life better.(高分句型一)
As senior high school students,You will be living a very busy life.So first of all,you should arrange your time properly.You'd better make a timetable so that you know when to study,exercise and rest.Only in this way can you make good use of every minute.(高分句型二)Besides,while in school,it is wise to develop a pleasant relationship with teachers and classmates.When you have a problem that you can't work it out alone,you'd better turn to your teachers or classmates for help.Of course you should lend a helping hand when necessary.Last but not least,I advise you to take an active part in societies at school,which will give you good chances to make friends and challenge yourselves.(高分句型三)
I hope the suggestions above will help you go through a rich and colorful school life.I'm sure that a beautiful future is waiting you.
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
A. | as it had been | B. | so had it been | ||
C. | what it had been | D. | so it had been |