题目内容
15.假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Mike在圣诞节期间要到北京游玩,同时约你一块去登长城.请根据下列要点给他写封电子邮件.要点如下:1.表示欢迎;
2.接受邀请;
3.行程安排.
注意:1.词数为100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.可以适当增加细节;以使行文连贯.
Dear Mike,
I'm so glad to learn that you plan to come to Beijing for a visit this Christmas.
Looking forward to seeing you!
Yours,
Li Hua.
分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示美国笔友Mike在圣诞节期间要到北京游玩,同时约你一块去登长城.请根据下列要点给他写封电子邮件,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:表示欢迎;接受邀请;行程安排.2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:As you know正如你所知;places of interest名胜古迹;pay a visit to 拜访;At the same time同时;have a good time过得愉快;
As you know,Beijing is a beautiful city with a very long history,so there are large numbers of places of interest in it.(高分句型一)
With the coming of Christmas holiday,I have been expecting to see you.(高分句型二)
At the same time,you can enjoy the delicious Chinese food and do some shopping.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Mike,
I am glad to learn that you plan to come to Beijing for a visit this Christmas.So first I will express a warm welcome to you.
As you know,Beijing is a beautiful city with a very long history,so there are large numbers of places of interest in it.(高分句型一)With the coming of Christmas holiday,I have been expecting to see you.(高分句型二)We'll visit the Great Wall on the first day.For the following days,you can pay a visit to the Summer Palace,the Summer Museum and Tian'anmen Square.At the same time,you can enjoy the delicious Chinese food and do some shopping.(高分句型三)I wish you would have a good time.
Looking forward to seeing you.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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