Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Zhang Yining, a world champion, is 1.68 meter tall. She begin to play ping-pong at the age of six. In 1993, he worked in the province team with other colleagues, all of them were hard-working. Under the help of her coach, Zhang Yining succeeded in winning scores of gold medals. She thinks doing sports and games help us keep strong and healthy. If we take no exercise, we may feel tired but get sick easily. In the brief, she attaches great important to health. Besides, she gets on very well with her teammates. The world champion enjoys surfing the Internet and playing trick on others.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】meter →meters

【2】begin →began

【3】he →she

【4】them→ whom

【5】Under →With

【6】help→ helps

【7】but → and

【8】删掉brief前的the

【9】important→ importance

【10】trick前加a或trick →tricks

【解析】

试题分析：世界乒乓球冠军张怡宁努力奋斗，在教练的帮助下获得了金牌。她重视健康，和队友相处融洽，喜欢上网，喜欢和别人玩把戏。

【1】meter →meters 考查名词。meter是可数名词，用复数形式。

【2】begin →began 考查动词。根据句意，开始打乒乓球这一动作发生在过去，用一般过去时。

【3】he →she 考查代词。前后指代应一致，此处指张怡宁，应用she。

【4】them→ whom 考查关系代词。Whom引导定语从句，指代先行词colleagues。

【5】Under →With 考查短语。With the help of… 在……的帮助下。

【6】help→ helps 考查动词。She thinks后的宾语从句中doing sports and games这一动名词短语做主语，故谓语动词应用helps。

【7】but → and 考查连词。根据句意，前后为顺承关系，故把but换and。

【8】删掉brief前的the 考查短语。In brief 简言之。

【9】important→ importance 考查短语。 Attach importance to… 重视……。

【10】trick前加a或trick →tricks 考查短语。和某人耍把戏play a trick on sb./play tricks on sb.。