Question

【题目】临近高考，为了帮助高三学生顺利复习，在高考中取得好成绩，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART” 专栏。假设你是该专栏的编辑 James , 收到一封署名为Anxiety的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的焦虑及困扰:近日脾气暴躁，压力大，晚上睡不着觉，白天无心听课，严重影响了正常的学习与生活。请用英文给该同学写一封信。

内容要点如下：

1．表示理解并给予安慰；

2．提出建议并说明理由；

注意：

1．词数100左右；

2．信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；

3．信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数;

Hi Anxiety,

I am sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the crucial moment.

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Yours,

James

Answer 1

【答案】

Hi Anxiety ,

I am sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the crucial moment. In fact, as a senior three student , it is so normal that everyone will have to face the special periods when things seem to be going worse and worse, so you don’t have to worry so much . The most important thing is to learn how to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. Here are three useful tips:

First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to relax yourself and regain usual mind. Last but not least, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be beneficial in lifting your spirits.

I hope you’ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal to achieve your goal.

Yours,

James

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于书信类写作，根据提示信息和题目要求来展开。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态。写作书信时一定要注意文章结构和层次，提出建议时要具有说服力，对于一些常用的动词，要注意其其他形式以更为简练的表达自己的观点，要灵活运用各种短语和从句来丰富文章的内容。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如 I am sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the crucial moment是that引导的宾语从句。In fact, as a senior three student , it is so normal that everyone will have to face the special periods when things seem to be going worse and worse使用了it引导的主语从句和when引导的定语从句的复合从句。The most important thing is to learn how to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret是so that引导的结果状语从句。此外，文章还使用了大量短语 go worse and worse , control your temper, letting your anger out , regain usual mind，be beneficial in lifting your spirits等。插入语 First，Second，Last but not least，以及Here are···，I hope···句式的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。