题目内容
8.Forty-three years seems like a long time to remember the name of an acquaintance(熟人).I have forgotten the name of an old lady,who was a customer on the paper routein my hometown when I was a twelve-year-old boy.Yet it remains in my memory that she taught me a lesson in forgivenesssthat I shall never forget.On a winter afternoon,a friend and I had nothing to do and we decided to throw stones onto the roof of the old lady's house from a spot near her backyard.The object of our play was to observe how the stoneschanged to missiles(投射物),as they rolled to the roof's edge and shot out into the yard like comets(彗星) falling from the sky.I found myself a perfectly smooth rock and threw it out.The stone was too smooth,however,so it slipped from my hand as I let it go and headed straight not for the roof but for a small window.At the sound of broken glass,we knew we were in trouble.Immediately,we ran away in a hurry.
I was too scared about getting caught that first night,so I can't sleep well.I was concerned about the old lady with the broken window in winter.I was afraid of being scolded seriously by the old lady and my parents.However,a few days later,when I was sure that I hadn't been discovered,I started to feel guilty for her misfortune.She still greeted me with a smileeach day when I gave her the paper.With days going on,I was no longer able to act comfortably in front of her.
Several days later,I made up my mind that I would save my paper delivery money,and in three weeks I had the seven dollars and thus I would cover the cost of her window.I put the money in an envelope with a note explainingthat I was sorry for breaking her window and hoped that the seven dollars should cover the cost for repairing it.
注意:
1 所续写短文的词数应在150字左右
2 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语
3 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头已经写好
4 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你使用的关键词语
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I waited until it was dark,walked secretly up to the old lady's house.I waited until it was dark,walked secretly up to the old lady's house.I put the letter through the letter shot in her door explaining that I was sorry for breaking her window.(高分句型一)My soul felt comfortable.I could have the forgiveness of me,and could look straight into the old lady's kind eyes in the yard.
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The next day,I handed the old lady the paper,smiling warmly.The next day,I handed the old lady the paper,smiling warmly.She thanked me for the paper and gave me a bag of cookies she had made herself.I thanked her and went on to eat the cookies as I continued my route.After several cookies,I felt an envelope and pulled it out of the bag.When I opened the envelope,I was surprised deeply.Inside were the seven dollars and a short note that said,"I'm proud of you."(高分句型二).
分析 这是一篇开放式的读后续写作,根据英语文章,首先读懂文章,然后进行续写,写作中主语时态及主谓一致等问题.注意不要遗漏要点,做到语句通顺.为了使意思更加连贯可适当使用连接词.
【亮点说明】本文在写作中使用了很多固定句式,如:I put the letter through the letter shot in her door explaining that I was sorry for breaking her window.(高分句型一)explaining 在句中作状语,that为宾语从句; Inside were the seven dollars and a short note that said,"I'm proud of you."(高分句型二)本句为全倒装结构,that为定语从句修饰a short note所以在学习中,我们应注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.
解答 I waited until it was dark,walked secretly up to the old lady's house.I put the letter through the letter shot in her door explaining that I was sorry for breaking her window.(高分句型一)My soul felt comfortable.I could have the forgiveness of me,and could look straight into the old lady's kind eyes in the yard.
The next day,I handed the old lady the paper,smiling warmly.She thanked me for the paper and gave me a bag of cookies she had made herself.I thanked her and went on to eat the cookies as I continued my route.After several cookies,I felt an envelope and pulled it out of the bag.When I opened the envelope,I was surprised deeply.Inside were the seven dollars and a short note that said,"I'm proud of you."(高分句型二)
点评 1.充分利用记叙文故事类的阅读理解或者完形填空.考生在做此类文章的试题时,读到适当的位置,可以短暂停止,根据已读部分文章的脉络,对文章进行发散思维,设想可能的几种结尾,最后对照原文的结尾,看自己的设想是否与原文一致.
2.经常实施微型化训练,也就是对所读文章的某一段落进行设想.根据某一段落的首句提示,结合文章的上文对该段进行合理设想,具体推断该段可能要讲述的内容.
A. | as | B. | if | C. | though | D. | unless |