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16.很多学校都开设了体育选修课(the selective PE lesson),如游泳、体操(gymnastics),篮球、足球、武术(martial art)、国际标准舞蹈(international ballroom dancing)、乒乓球(table tennis)等.请谈谈你喜欢的体育选修课并说明原因.

分析 本篇作文要求考生写你最喜欢的体育选修课以及原因.也就是最喜欢的运动和原因.文中给出了游泳、体操(gymnastics),篮球、足球、武术(martial art)、国际标准舞蹈(international ballroom dancing)、乒乓球(table tennis),以及其他,考生需选择最熟悉最有话可写的一个来写作.注意在写作中应用上高水平的句型以及词汇词组,来增加作文亮点,使作文脱颖而出.
重要短语:
both physically and psychologically,身心上,a good way to,做什么的好办法.
高分句子:
1.So long as we are carefully enough,sports can do us nothing but good.句中So long as 引导让步状语从句,意为只要.
2.That is why I like swimming lesson.本句含有重要句式,That is why…这就是..的原因.

解答 There are many kinds of interesting sports for the selective PE lesson,such as basketball,football,swimming and running,but the most I like is swimming.(点明主题)
     When I was a little child,my father took me to the river which near my house to learn swimming.Then,I found it's really fun and cool when I swim in the water,especially in summer,It's the most exciting thing to do when summer comes.So I like swimming.It's so wonderful.(介绍原因)
     My participation in the selective PE lesson tells me that swimming can make us healthy both physically and psychologically.It is also a good way for people to know each other and can promote friendship between people.So long as we are carefully enough,sports can do us nothing but good.(高分句型)That is why I like swimming lesson.(高分句型)

点评 本篇文章话题较为简单,关于最喜欢的运动考生都有话可写.所以重要的就是写作时为了语言的连贯应该恰当使用连接词和插入语以及注意高级词汇和句式的使用.这才是获得高分的重点.

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Owners must report their laptop missing by visiting a website,which sends a message to the model:a red and yellow"lost or stolen"sign appears on its screen when it is started.Under the latest version(版本)of the software,users can also send a spoken message.
The message can be set to reappear every 30seconds,no matter how many times the thief closes it."One customer sent a message saying,'You are being tracked.I am right at your door',"said Carrie Hafeman,chief executive of the company which produces the program,Retriever.
In the latest version,people can add a spoken message.For example,the laptop's speakers will say:"Help,this laptop is reported lost or stolen.If you are not my owner,report me now."
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If a thief accesses the internet with the stolen laptop,Retriever will collect information on the internet service provider in use,so that the police can be alerted to its location.
Thousands of laptops are stolen every year form homes and offices,but with the use of laptops increasing,the number stolen while their owners are out and about has been rising sharply.
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B.to express the owners'anger to the thief
C.to remind the thief of this conscience
D.to make the thief give up his mind
73.Different from other security software,Retriever canD.
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C.operate the laptop by means of and alternative password
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【写作内容】
 1.以约30词概括上文的主要内容.
 2.以约120词对"中学生产生矛盾或冲突"的现象进行议论,内容包括:
   1)中学生产生矛盾或冲突的原因;
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 2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称.
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8.Forty-three years seems like a long time to remember the name of an acquaintance(熟人).I have forgotten the name of an old lady,who was a customer on the paper routein my hometown when I was a twelve-year-old boy.Yet it remains in my memory that she taught me a lesson in  forgivenesssthat I shall never forget.
On a winter afternoon,a friend and I had nothing to do and we decided to throw stones onto the roof of the old lady's house from a spot near her backyard.The object of our play was to observe how  the stoneschanged to missiles(投射物),as they rolled to the roof's edge and shot out into  the yard like comets(彗星) falling from the sky.I found myself a perfectly smooth rock and threw it out.The stone was too smooth,however,so it slipped from my hand as I let it go and headed straight not for the roof but for a small window.At the sound of broken glass,we knew we were in trouble.Immediately,we ran away in a hurry.
I was too scared about getting caught that first night,so I can't sleep well.I was concerned about  the old lady with the broken window in winter.I was afraid of being scolded seriously by the old lady and my parents.However,a few days later,when I was sure that I hadn't been discovered,I started to feel guilty for her misfortune.She still greeted me with  a smileeach day when I gave her the paper.With days going on,I was no longer able to act comfortably in front of her.
Several days later,I made up my mind that I would save my paper delivery money,and in three weeks I had the  seven dollars and thus I would cover the cost of her window.I put the money in an  envelope with a note  explainingthat I was sorry for  breaking her window and hoped that the seven dollars should cover the cost for repairing it.
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1 所续写短文的词数应在150字左右
2 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语
3 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头已经写好
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Paragraph 1
I waited until it was dark,walked secretly up to the old lady's house.I waited until it was dark,walked secretly up to the old lady's house.I put the letter through the letter shot in her door explaining that I was sorry for breaking her window.(高分句型一)My soul felt comfortable.I could have the forgiveness of me,and could look straight into the old lady's kind eyes in the yard.
Paragraph 2
The next day,I handed the old lady the paper,smiling warmly.The next day,I handed the old lady the paper,smiling warmly.She thanked me for the paper and gave me a bag of cookies she had made herself.I thanked her and went on to eat the cookies as I continued my route.After several cookies,I felt an envelope and pulled it out of the bag.When I opened the envelope,I was surprised deeply.Inside were the seven dollars and a short note that said,"I'm proud of you."(高分句型二).

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