题目内容
【题目】假设你是李华,你的美国朋友Peter最近在某电视台举办的汉语演讲比赛中获得第一名。他的努力和坚持给了你重要的人生启示。请写信向他表示祝贺和感谢。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Peter,
Congratulations to you on your winning first place in the Chinese Speech Competition held recently. It is no wonder that you have made such great progress in your Chinese study, because you have always been working hard and are never willing to give up.
To be honest, what I admire most is your hard work and determination. It’s from you that I have learned a valuable lesson, that is, “No pains, no gains.” Therefore, I would like to express my sincere thanks to you for what you have taught me.
Wish you more advance in your study!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本文属于提纲类作文,要求假设你是李华,你的美国朋友Peter最近在某电视台举办的汉语演讲比赛中获得第一名。他的努力和坚持给了你重要的人生启示。请写信向他表示祝贺和感谢。要注意写信的格式和特殊用词。考虑用一般现在时来写。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合给出的开头,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面,结构紧凑,是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语,为文章增色不少,如:It is no wonder that难怪,give up放弃。还使用了主语从句To be honest, what I admire most is your hard work and determination.和定语从句As far as I am concerned, this game is a very good chance for us. For one thing, doing sports will not only do good to our health, but also helps us to refresh ourselves and keep a clearer mind, which will make us learn more efficiently.和强调句It’s from you that I have learned a valuable lesson, that is, “No pains, no gains.”等多种句式结构,增加了文章的可读性。
【题目】你的英语老师让同学们就发展克隆技术展开了讨论,同学们纷纷发表了自己的看法。请你根据下面的表格写一篇120个词左右的短文做一总结,并发表自己的看法。
话题 | Cloning | ||
观点及 支持率 | 65% for | 35% against | 你的观点 |
理由 | 1.克隆技术能够促进科学的发展; 2.克隆技术对人类很有益,它可以帮助治愈很多疾病,挽救很多人的生命 | 1.目前,克隆技术还存在很多问题,滥用这项技术会给人类带来难以想象的后果; 2.如果有科学家利用克隆技术来克隆人的话,将会导致很多问题的出现,如人口猛增等 | …… |
注意:开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Today we had a class discussion about whether cloning should be developed. Opinions varied.
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