题目内容
【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I saw a example of kindness during the Special Olympic Games in 1968. Kim, a severe disabled boy, took part in the 50-meter dash. He was racing against two other athlete who were in wheelchairs. In the race, Kim quickly moved ahead the other two. Ten meters from the finish line, he has turned to see how the others were doing. The other boy was pushed forward with his hands. The girl had turned her wheelchair around, but he was stuck against the wall. Kim stopped, went back, but pushed the girl across the finish line. The boy in the wheelchair won the race, and the girl comes in second place. Kim lost the race. However, the crowd, included me, didn’t think so, so we all gave him a cheer for his kindness.
【答案】1.第一句: a → an
2.第二句: severe → severely
3.第三句: athlete → athletes
4.第四句: ahead ∧ the → of
5.第五句:去掉has
6.第六句: pushed → pushing
7.第七句: he → she
8.第八句: but → and
9.第九句: comes → came
10.第十一句: included → including
【解析】1.第一句: a → an考查不定冠词，example是以元音读音开始的单词应该用不定冠词an，故将第一句a改为an。
2.第二句: severe → severely考查形容词和副词的区别，严重残疾的男孩a severely disabled boy，用副词severely修饰disabled，故将第二句severe改为severely。
3.第三句: athlete → athletes考查名词单复数，two other athletes另外两名运动员，用名词复数形式，故将第三句athlete改为athletes。
4.第四句: ahead ∧ the → of考查固定搭配，ahead of..在…前面，故第四句ahead后边加of。
5.第五句:去掉has考查时态，整篇文章用过去时态，故将第五句has去掉。
6.第六句: pushed → pushing考查语态，男孩正在奋力向前，用进行时态主动语态，不用被动语态，故将第六句pushed改为pushing。
7.第七句: he → she考查代词，并列连词but前边说到女孩旋转轮椅，后边应该说她被卡在了墙那儿，故将第七句he改为she。
8.第八句: but → and考查连词，Kim停了下来，把女孩推到了终点，是并列关系，故将第八句but改为and。
9.第九句: comes → came考查时态，整篇文章是过去时态，故将第九句comes改为came。
10.第十一句: included → including考查介词，包括我including me，故将第十一句included改为including。
