题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,请给你校爱好戏剧文化的外教Connie写一封电子邮件,邀请她一起去观看皮影戏。邮件的内容包括:
1. 观看皮影戏的时间和地点;
2. 皮影戏简介(一门古老的传统民间艺术;是世界电影的祖先;给人们带来欢乐等);
3. 期待回复。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:皮影戏shadow play
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【答案】Dear Connie,
I am writing to you to invite you to enjoy a shadow play. Shadow play is an ancient traditional folk art in China, and also the ancestor of films in the world. The actors or actresses in a shadow play are figures made of donkey or cow leather. Being controlled by one or several persons, these figures are reflected via light on the screen. At that time, it brought people pleasure as modern movies and TVs do.
The performance will be held on Saturday, May 12 from 3:00 pm to 5:00 pm in the city cinema. So it will be a golden opportunity for you to experience Chinese culture. Will you come and enjoy it?
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
这是一篇提纲类作文。要求考生用英语写一封电子邮件,邀请外教Connie一起去观看皮影戏。
第一步:审题
体裁:提纲类作文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时。
结构:总分法
要求:观看皮影戏的时间和地点;皮影戏简介(一门古老的传统民间艺术;是世界电影的祖先;给人们带来欢乐等);期待回复。
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
ancient;folk art;ancestor;figure;reflect;modern;performance;opportunity;experience
第三步:连词成句
1. I am writing to you to invite you to enjoy a shadow play.
2. Shadow play is an ancient traditional folk art in China, and also the ancestor of films in the world.
3. The actors or actresses in a shadow play are figures made of donkey or cow leather.
4. Being controlled by one or several persons, these figures are reflected via light on the screen.
5. At that time, it brought people pleasure as modern movies and TVs do.
6. The performance will be held on Saturday, May 12 from 3:00 pm to 5:00 pm in the city cinema.
7. So it will be a golden opportunity for you to experience Chinese culture.
8. Will you come and enjoy it?
9. Looking forward to your early reply.
第四步:连句成篇
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:while, meanwhile, However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。