Question

【题目】假设你是李华， 第五十个世界地球日（the Earth Day）)即将到来，你校将举办以此为主题的学生海报展。请你写一封邮件邀请外教Mary来观看展览。

要点如下：

1.展览时间和地点；

2.简要介绍展览活动和内容。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Mary,

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

LiHua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mary,

How's everything going? With the fiftieth Earth Day approaching, our school is going to hold a poster exhibition related to it. I'm writing to invite you to attend the meaningful display.

Scheduled on 22 April, 2020, the exhibition will be held in the school hall. With the aim of drawing attention to critical environmental protection, the activity provides a platform for participants to remind people that we should care about nature. Additionally, well-designed works chosen from keen students cover various aspects relevant to protection issues. You can have access to posters that are a combination of art and education.

Were you present, you would be treated to an instructive and touching feast conveying love and concern to our mother Earth. Time permitting, I sincerely hope that you can make it. Looking forward to your coming!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生邀请外教Mary来看以地球日为主题的学生海报展。

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主

结构：总分总

要求：

1. 写信目的

2. 展览时间和地点；

3. 简要介绍展览活动和内容。

第二步：列提纲（重点词组）

be going to do sth./ invite sb. to do sth./ take part in/ pay attention to/ a variety of/ remind sb. of sth./ provide sth. for sb./ have access to/ range from…to…/ a wide range of/ be scheduled/ look forward to

第三步：连词成句

1. As the fiftieth Earth Day approaches, our school is planning to hold a poster exhibition related to it.

2. Knowing you are interested in environmental protection, I'm writing to invite you to participate in the meaningful display.

3. Scheduled on 22 April, 2020, the exhibition will be held in the school hall.

4. Aimed at drawing people's attention to critical environmental protection, the activity provides a platform for participants to remind people that we should care about nature.

5. Additionally, there are a variety of well-designed works chosen from keen students, covering various aspects relevant to protection issues.

6. You can have access to posters that combine art and education.

7. Were you present, you would have a meaningful experience.

8. Time permitting, I sincerely hope that you can make it.

9. Looking forward to your coming!

第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）

表示并列的连词：and/ but/ or/ so…

状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…

定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…

第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）