Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Terry一行人要来你市体验元宵节，他请你帮他们预订酒店，请你给他回一封电子邮件。要点如下：

1. 表示欢迎；

2. 询问到达时间；

3. 询问具体要求（价位、房间数等）。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

参考词汇：元宵节the Lantern Festival

Dear Terry,

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Yours sincerely

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear terry,

I’m honored to know that you’ve decided to have a taste of the Lantern Festival in my city. I’m also more than pleased to reserve a hotel for you in advance. But I need some details of your travel. Firstly, when will your flight arrive at the airport? If I’m available then , I will pick you up. Besides, prices of a hotel room range from RMB 399 to 999, so which kind of room do you prefer? And more importantly, how many rooms do you exactly need? Only if I figure out all of the questions can I make reservations for you.

Please give me more detailed information about your schedule. Looking forward to your early coming.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文写作，要求考生写一封邮件，在邮件中写明：表示欢迎Terry一行人来你市体验元宵节；询问他们到达时间；询问他们对宾馆的具体要求（价位、房间数等）。

第一步：审题

体裁：一般性应用文——书信（邮件）

格式：格式是书信，要写明写信的对象（即称呼）和写信人（即署名），正文前可适当添加问候语，还要有结尾语

要点：要包括三个要点——表示欢迎Terry一行人来体验元宵节；询问他们到达时间；询问他们对宾馆的具体要求（价位、房间数等）。

结构：总分总法

第二步：列提纲（重点短语和词汇）

the Lantern Festival ; reserve; in advance ; details ;range; need; figure out ; make reservations ;information ;schedule

第三步：连词成句

It’s glad to know that you’ve decided to come to my city at the Lantern Festival .

I like to reserve a hotel for you in advance. When will you arrive at the airport? How many rooms do you need? What type of hotel do you prefer ?

Please tell some details of your travel.

Please give me more detailed information about your schedule.

第四步：连句成篇

第五步：润色修改