题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,正与你校英国交换生Eric一起参加“规范英文标识(Identifying and Correcting Mistranslations)”系列志愿活动,请你写一封邮件,告知他下一次活动安排。内容包括:
1. 活动时间、地点;
2. 活动内容;
3. 相关准备。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Possible version 1
Dear Eric,
We intend to continue with the Project of Identifying and Correcting Mistranslations as planned. I’m writing to tell you about the coming activity.
Having edited the mistranslations collected, we are expected to sort them out. It involves analyzing reasons for the mistakes and getting ready for the presentation. Scheduled from 8:00 am to 11:00 am, the volunteering will be carried out at our school library. Please do remember to bring your laptop so that we can make a PPT, which will help clearly present the outcome.
Contact me if you have any questions.
Li Hua
Possible version 2
Dear Eric,
Shall we move on with our project this Saturday? We are going to work together to sort out various mistranslations based on the information we collected during our previous volunteering trips. And then we’ll discuss and correct them before we make a file on the computer.
If it’s convenient for you, shall we meet at the school library at 8 a.m. Don’t forget to the your U disk with the photos you’ve taken. I’ll carry my laptop and dictionary to help us make precise translations.
See you soon!
Lihua
Possible version 3
Dear Eric,
How is everything going?
Let’s continue our Identifying and Correcting Mistranslations Project this Saturday, shall we? How about going to Weihai Coastal Park this time? We’ll walk along the greenways and go around the park to check every possible tourist sign. As usual, you take pictures and I record the information, so get your camera ready. Besides, you’d better take a hat to avoid getting sunburnt.
Shall we meet at 7:45 a.m. at the main entrance of the park if it’s convenient for you?
Lihua
Possible version 4
Dear Eric,
I'm still rippingmad even though one week has passed since we presented our findings of the Identifying and Correcting Mistranslations Project.I can’t wait to go even further.
Shall we meet in the English Club at 2 p.m. this Sunday? We’ll go on discussing about the report to be delivered to the government for a more international city. So do remember to get your outline ready. And what do you think of the idea to enclose a brochure? Think it over and I’d like to get your view.
Li Hua
【解析】
本文为一篇应用文,是向Eric告知规范英语标识的活动安排。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法。总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
写作要求:1. 活动时间、地点;
2. 活动内容;
3. 相关准备。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
coming; edit; expect; involve; schedule; clearly
第三步:连词成句
I’m writing to tell you about the coming activity.
Having edited the mistranslations collected, we are expected to sort them out.
It involves analyzing reasons for the mistakes and getting ready for the presentation.
Scheduled from 8:00 am to 11:00 am, the volunteering will be carried out at our school library.
Please do remember to bring your laptop so that we can make a PPT, which will help clearly present the outcome.
在进行造句的时候一定要注意时态和语态上面的问题.
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1. 文章的结构顺序:活动时间、地点;活动内容;相关准备。
2.表并列补充关系:and; so that
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰
第五步:修改润色