[题目]假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧).并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线 (＼) 划掉.修改:在错的词下画一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1. 每处错误及其修改� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线 (＼) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I still remember that cold day when Chris and I go skating on a lake. While enjoying ourselves, I suddenly noticed something unusual. The ice broke and at the moment. I warned Chris to take care, he slipped into the lake. I was too frightening to know what to do. I cried for help anxious. Hearing my cries, a young man rushed over, jump into the lake to save Chris. At last, he was out of the water and we immediately sent him to the near hospital. After short while, Chris’ parents arrived. They expressed their thank to the young man. How a respectable man!

【答案】1. go →went

2. ourselves →myself

3. 去掉and

4. frightening→ frightened

5. anxious →anxiously

6. jump →jumping

7. near →nearest/nearby

8. After 后加a

9. thank →thanks

10. How →What

【解析】

本文是记叙文。作者和Chris去湖上滑冰，结果冰裂了Chris掉进湖里。一位年轻人路过跳进水里救出了Chris，Chris被送到医院。作者表达了对年轻人的感谢和尊敬。

1. 考查动词时态。本文讲述的是过去发生的一件事，与上下文时态一致用一般过去时。故go 改为went。

2. 考查代词一致。句意：正当我玩得开心的时候，我突然注意到一些不寻常的事情。句中主语是I，前后指代一致，故ourselves 改为myself。

3. 考查连词。此处指那一刻冰裂开了，主语是The ice ，谓语是broke，at the moment是时间状语，句中and是多余的。故去掉 and。

4. 考查形容词。frightening “令人恐惧的”通常用来修饰物，此处指我很害怕，修饰人用frightened。故frightening 改为frightened。

5. 考查副词。修饰动词cried用副词，指“焦急地哭喊”，故anxious 改为anxiously。

6. 考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知，句中已有谓语动词rushed，此处用非谓语动词。主语a young man和jump是主动关系，用现在分词作状语。故jump 改为jumping。

7. 考查形容词或最高级。此处指我们立刻把Chris送到最近的医院，用形容词最高级。也可以指附近的医院，用nearby修饰hospital。故near 改为nearest/nearby。

8. 考查冠词。表示“过了片刻，过了一会儿”是after a while，是固定短语。故 After 后加a。

9. 考查名词。做expressed的宾语，由their修饰用名词，表示名词“谢谢”要用复数，故 thank改为 thanks。

10. 考查感叹句。how引导感叹句时后加形容词或副词，此处感叹名词man要用what。故How 改为What。

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中考新航标初中重点知识总复习指导系列答案

A.To get a toy

B.To work as a designer.

C.To earn money for a car.

【题目】假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack听说你大学准备攻读“中医药学”专业，发邮件向你询问原由，请你回复邮件。内容包括：

1. 中医简介；

2. 家庭影响；

3. 个人愿望。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：中医药学 Traditional Chinese Medicine(TCM)

Dear Jack,

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。母亲节要来了, 你的美国好友Jim想知道你准备如何庆祝母亲节，请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：

1.庆祝方法；

2.询问Jim如何庆祝母亲节。

注意：1．词数不少于50；

2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

With the graduation day approaching, memory are flooding back to me. I remember how unwillingly I was to enter the classroom. “If I have studied harder before, I would have gone to a better senior high school,” I said it to myself. However, I later realized I fell in love with a school.

The campus scenery is pleasant. The antique pavilion (亭子), where stands on a small hillside, impresses me most. Surrounded green trees, I can admire the beautiful sunrise and sunset. I often wander around the charming pond and see myself reflecting in its transparent water. Any pains I have are smoothed and float away. The kind teachers and easy-going classmates also warm my heart and cheer me up when I am in low spirits.

Every time I recall my unforgettable moments, I smile. We’ve all grew over these three years.

【题目】Keys to a Good Family Life

In posters and ads we often see pictures of happy families, but family life is not all smiles and laughter. All families are different and have problems, but you can make your family life better with hard work and determination. 【1】

Spend time together as a family. Some people are too busy for family time. You have to set aside time xue to plan and spend special times together. 【2】 Make the conversation around ke the table pleasant and caring; maybe ask each person how their day was or what is happening wang in their school or work life. Doing household chores together also helps.

【3】 Allow members of your family to express their own feelings and ideas. Maintain eye contact and don’t interrupt when someone is talking. Listen carefully to what they are saying, before you judge or disagree. Hearing someone else, and being heard by that person, is the foundation of a good relationship. 【4】 Try not to be angry at someone’s opinions. Even if you think that they are wrong, listen with an open mind to show that you care - and remember that no one is perfect.

Meet each other’s needs. Give time to each and every one of your family members. Know what is going on in their lives and what they need help with. 【5】 If they need help with something, set aside time to do so. To be aware of your family members’ emotional and physical needs, you need to communicate.

A.Listen to their problems.

B.Try applying the following steps.

C.Allow each person to be an individual.

D.So these steps will help you all get on well.

E.Respect your family members’ feelings and ideas.

F.Every day it should be eating at least one meal together.

G.Each family member has his or her own opinions or suggestions.

【题目】 The college schedule is very different from the traditional high school schedule. 【1】 In high school, you had to take the US History, which was offered every day at 10:00 a.m. In college, you’ll probably need to take a history class, but you could have 10 choices offered on different days and at different times.

【2】 For example, you will pick a course that will determine the types of classes you will specialize in. In high school, you have a set curriculum of classes you have to take across all subject areas. 【3】 During the first two years, you’ll take more general education classes. But during your junior and senior years, you’ll take fewer general education classes.

Another big difference you should be aware of is classes. Now, you’re in school from 7:30 a.m.-2:30 p.m., Monday through Friday. 【4】 In college, you might have a science class on Mondays and Fridays from 10:10-11:00 a.m. Perhaps you’ll have a Chinese class on Thursdays from 1:15-3:00 p.m.

【5】 If you go to a large university, your campus will be your home and might take up an entire town. You might see hundreds of students going out to bars every night. Many colleges are home both to academic and social clubs. In high school your stage is regional. In college, your stage is national-and sometimes global.

A.This will not be the case in college.

B.In college, think about your schedule as a pyramid.

C.Some things will appear similar, but many will be different.

D.Typically, there is a lot more flexibility with your college classes.

E.The differences will challenge your self-management as much as your abilities.

F.The atmosphere and social life in college are also different from those in high school.

G.The other cool thing is that you usually have more opportunities to explore your interests.

【题目】假定你是李华，正与你校英国交换生Eric一起参加“规范英文标识(Identifying and Correcting Mistranslations)”系列志愿活动，请你写一封邮件，告知他下一次活动安排。内容包括：

1. 活动时间、地点；

2. 活动内容；

3. 相关准备。

注意：1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【题目】假定你是李华，你校将举办太极拳（Tai Chi）比赛。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友James参加，内容包括：

1. 比赛时间；

2. 活动安排；

3. 表达期待。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。

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