题目内容
17.某学校附近拟兴建一座化工厂.请你以该校学生的名义,根据下表内容写一篇短文,陈述反对兴建此化工厂的理由.字数100左右.建厂结果 | 反对理由 |
为本市赚不少钱 | 危害大于好处 |
排放大量污水 | 严重污染饮用水 |
排放有毒气体 | 造成空气污染 |
占用大片土地 | 侵占学生们游戏、玩耍的场所 |
分析 本篇书面表达属于图表类作文,根据提示信息以该校学生的名义,根据下表内容写一篇短文,陈述反对兴建此化工厂的理由,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:分别从建厂结果和反对理由两个方面来讨论该话题 2、图表是文章的总体框架,要在图表的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:It is said that…据说;be against反对;last but not least最后的同样是最重要的;play games玩游戏
It is said that a chemical factory will be built near our school soon.(高分句型一)
With lots of waste water to be poured,the drinking water will be badly polluted.(高分句型二)
Last but not least,the site of the factory has been the only place where we students play games and have sports after school.(高分句型三)
解答 It is said that a chemical factory will be built near our school soon.(高分句型一)Most students,including myself,are against this plan.We do think it will do us more harm than good.Although it will bring in a lot of money for our city,there are other things to consider besides money.With lots of waste water to be poured,the drinking water will be badly polluted.(高分句型二)The air over our city will be polluted by the poisonous gas too.We will never be able to breathe fresh air.How can we live here any longer.Last but not least,the site of the factory has been the only place where we students play games and have sports after school.(高分句型三)Where would we go if it were occupied?
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.