题目内容
7.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
My brother is training to a vet.He's a hard worker so I think he'll do very better in his final exams.I'd be surprising if he didn't find the position right away at an animal hospital.But there was the possibility that he might work at a zoo or maybe an animal park.In several years's time,he could possible have him own clinic.And the next step could be opening his own animal hospital----who know?Because he has always loved animals,so I can see him being a success in this field.He'll enjoy every minutes of it!
分析 作者在本文讲述了哥哥目前的求职情况--想成为一名兽医,以及他以后可能的发展前景.
解答 My brother is training to∧a vet.He's a hard worker so I think he'll do very better in his final exams.I'd be surprising if he didn't find the position right away at an animal hospital.But there was the possibility that he might work at a zoo or maybe an animal park.In several years's time,he could possible have him own clinic.And the next step could be opening his own animal hospital----who know?Because he has always loved animals,so I can see him being a success in this field.He'll enjoy every minutes of it!
详解:
1.to后面加be;考查系动词,train to be意为"训练成为",加系动词be与后面的a vet构成系表结构.
2.better改为well;考查副词,分析句子可知前后没有比较,do well in是固定搭配,意为"在某方面做的好".
3.surprising改为surprised;考查分词作形容词;主语I指人,故用过去分词做形容词,意为"感到惊奇的".
4.the改为a;考查冠词,此处的position第一次出现,用不定冠词a泛指"一个".
5.was改为is;考查动词的时态,本文基本时态为一般现在时,故此次要用is.
6.possible改为possibly;考查副词,此处用副词做状语修饰动词have.
7.him改为his;考查形容词性物主代词,此处"one's own+名词"是固定结构,意为"某人自己的".
8.know改为knows;考查主谓一致,主语who是代词,文章时态有时一般现在时,故动词用第三人称单数形式.
9.去掉so;考查连词,前面有because引导原因状语从句,后面不能再用so.
10.minutes改为minute;考查名词,every后面跟单数形式,every minute"每一分钟".
点评 短文改错题首先要整体理解短文意思,抓住中心思想,结合语境和上下文关系,充分运用平时掌握的固定搭配,习惯用法,句型结构等等来发现文章的错误之处,加以修正.
A famous Roman scholar (44)Cto be on a boat nearby when all of this happened,so he went to the area to see what was (45)D on.Even he did not know what a volcano was.It was unfortunate that he too died in the disaster.
36.A.city | B.mountain | C.earthquake | D.volcano |
37 A.find | B.destroy | C.hate | D.punish |
38.A.it | B.themselves | C.that | D.them |
39.A.Then | B.And | C.But | D.Also |
40.A.water | B.fire | C.earth | D.ash |
41.A.high | B.red | C.hot | D.strong |
42.A.studied | B.collected | C.gathered | D.found |
43.A.because | B.for | C.so | D.while |
44.A.used | B,seemed | C.happened | D.remained |
45.A.coming | B.happening | C.moving | D.going |
建厂结果 | 反对理由 |
为本市赚不少钱 | 危害大于好处 |
排放大量污水 | 严重污染饮用水 |
排放有毒气体 | 造成空气污染 |
占用大片土地 | 侵占学生们游戏、玩耍的场所 |