题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假定你叫李华,就读于北京大学。请根据以下提示,用英文给曾教过你的英语老师王老师写一封感谢信,表达你对他的思念与感激之情。内容应包括:
1. 感谢老师曾经的关心和帮助;
2. 中肯评价老师的教学方法;
3. 再次表达感激之情并祝福老师。
注意:1. 词数100词左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Wang,
How are you recently? I’m glad to write to you…
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mr. Wang,
How are you recently? I’m glad to write to you with my deep thought of you and respect for you. I am studying in Peking University now. I really appreciate what you did for my English study. Without your help, I wouldn’t have accomplished my dream.
In my memory, you are an outstanding teacher who has a strong sense of responsibility. Whatever questions were, you would answer me patiently. Besides, it was you that comforted me when I was upset. You inspired me to fight for my dream and led me to the way of success.
When I want to express my thanks to you now, words fail me. I just hope you can be happy and healthy forever.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题,并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语write to sb 给某人写信;accomplish one’s dream实现某人的梦想;fight for 为。。而战斗;I really appreciate what you did for my English study这个句子中what引导宾语从句;Without your help, I wouldn’t have accomplished my dream.这个句子运用到对过去的虚拟;Besides, it was you that comforted me when I was upset.这个句子运用到强调句,用来强调主语;