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【题目】书面表达

假定你是李华，正在一所美国学校学习英文。你对学校周末音乐俱乐部 (Music Club at Weekend) 很感兴趣，决定申请加入。现给该俱乐部负责人写一封信，内容如下：

1、表示有意加入； 2、介绍音乐特长； 3、说明性格优势； 4、期待满意答复。

注意：① 词数：100左右；

② 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

③ 文章起始句已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Sir / Madam,

I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student taking the English courses at our school. ...

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【答案】

Dear Sir / Madam.

I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student taking the English courses at our school. I’m interested in Music Club at Weekend and I’d like to join it if possible. I’m good at playing the piano. I have been playing the piano for more than ten years and I once won the third place in a nation-wide piano playing competition. Also I can sing Chinese folk songs very well. As for my personalities, I think I’m open-minded, friendly and easy-going, and above all, I really enjoy making friends with people from all around the world. I would be very happy if I can be admitted into the club! Looking forward to your reply!

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：假定你是李华，正在一所美国学校学习英文。你对学校周末音乐俱乐部 (Music Club at Weekend) 很感兴趣，决定申请加入。现给该俱乐部负责人写一封信，内容如下：1、表示有意加入； 2、介绍音乐特长； 3、说明性格优势； 4、期待满意答复。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：① 词数：100左右；② 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯; ③ 文章起始句已给出，不计入总词数。

【亮点说明】if possible.此处运用省略；I’m good at playing the piano.固定词组后跟动名词做宾语；I have been playing the piano for more than ten years and I once won the third place in a nation-wide piano playing competition.现在完成进行时态合并列举完美结合；I would be very happy if I can be admitted into the club!条件状语从句使用准确；另外，Also，As for my personalities, above all, all around the world，be admitted into，Looking forward to your reply!为文章增光添彩。