Question

15．假设你是新华中学的学生会主席．近来，随着网络的普及，学生的汉字书写能力降低．为了保护传统民族文化--汉字，校学生会提出倡议．请你根据以下内容提示，为学校《英语沙龙》的同学们写一封倡议书．
内容要点：1．少上网，多读书、勤记笔记；
2．养成练书写和写日记的习惯；
3．自拟一项其他方面的倡议内容．
注意：短文字数不少于100词．参考词汇：汉字Chinese characters
Dear friends，
In recent years，many of us spend a lot of time on the Internet with its popularity．As a result，our handwriting is not so good as it was in the past．In order to protect our Chinese characters and write both nicely and neatly，we'd like to offer some suggestions：（高分句型一）
We should spend less time online so that we can have more time to read books and newspaper．（高分句型二）We'd better form the habit of practicing calligraphy and keeping diaries every day．Besides，it is better to write letters to our relatives and friends by hand rather than send e-mails．（高分句型三）As the saying goes，"The style is the man．"Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial to us students．So please pay more attention to our handwriting in the future．
Let's take action now!
Students'Union．

Answer 1

分析 本篇写作要求我们写倡议书，首先注意语气和倡议书的格式，其实作文结构可分为以下几部分：①由于网络的普及，我们疏忽了我们的传统汉字．为了保护我们的汉字文化，提出几点建议．②少上网，多读书看报，经常练习书法和写作；③尝试给朋友亲笔写信；④从现在做起，关注我们的中华文化．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：As a result结果；so good as 和…一样好；In order to以便，为了；form the habit of形成…的习惯；Besides另外；As the saying goes正如谚语所说；pay more attention to多加关注；
In order to protect our Chinese characters and write both nicely and neatly，we'd like to offer some suggestions：（高分句型一）
We should spend less time online so that we can have more time to read books and newspaper．（高分句型二）
Besides，it is better to write letters to our relatives and friends by hand rather than send e-mails．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear friends，
      In recent years，many of us spend a lot of time on the Internet with its popularity．As a result，our handwriting is not so good as it was in the past．In order to protect our Chinese characters and write both nicely and neatly，we'd like to offer some suggestions：（高分句型一）
     We should spend less time online so that we can have more time to read books and newspaper．（高分句型二）We'd better form the habit of practicing calligraphy and keeping diaries every day．Besides，it is better to write letters to our relatives and friends by hand rather than send e-mails．（高分句型三）As the saying goes，"The style is the man．"Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial to us students．So please pay more attention to our handwriting in the future．
      Let's take action now!
                                                                                                                                                                                         Students'Union

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．