题目内容
4.假定你是李华.第二届风筝节将于下周日在你所在的城市举办,请给正在北京学中文的你的美国朋友Mike写邮件,邀请他前来参加.内容包括:1.建议的交通方式;
2.风筝节活动:了解风筝历史,放风筝等.
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
Dear Mike,
I'd like to invite you to join me in the Kite Festival to be held next Sunday in my city.It is an activity in which you can appreciate all kinds of fantastic kites and get to know its birthplace and history.(高分句型一)Since it happens that you are studying Chinese in Beijing,I think it's such a good chance for you to taste something about Chinese tradition and culture.(高分句型二)I'm also expecting you to join me in flying a kite made by myself.We'll have a lot of fun.
If you are able to come,please let me know and I suggest you take a train here.(高分句型三)
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua.
分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息假定你是李华.第二届风筝节将于下周日在你所在的城市举办,请给正在北京学中文的你的美国朋友Mike写邮件,邀请他前来参加.写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:建议的交通方式;风筝节活动:了解风筝历史,放风筝等.2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:all kinds of各种各样;have a lot of fun玩的高兴;be able to do能够做某事;Look forward to盼望;
It is an activity in which you can appreciate all kinds of fantastic kites and get to know its birthplace and history.(高分句型一)
Since it happens that you are studying Chinese in Beijing,I think it's such a good chance for you to taste something about Chinese tradition and culture.(高分句型二)
If you are able to come,please let me know and I suggest you take a train here.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Mike,
I'd like to invite you to join me in the Kite Festival to be held next Sunday in my city.It is an activity in which you can appreciate all kinds of fantastic kites and get to know its birthplace and history.(高分句型一)Since it happens that you are studying Chinese in Beijing,I think it's such a good chance for you to taste something about Chinese tradition and culture.(高分句型二)I'm also expecting you to join me in flying a kite made by myself.We'll have a lot of fun.
If you are able to come,please let me know and I suggest you take a train here.(高分句型三)
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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