Question

20．假如你是李华，你和交流生Stephen所在的合唱队（choir）进入了决赛．请给他写一封电子邮件，告知这一信息，通知他训练的时间和地点，并让他推荐一首合唱的英文歌曲．
注意：
1．词数：100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Stephen，
I'm very excited to tell you that our choir has succeeded in entering the final competition．
However，we still have a long way to go．So our trai ning is scheduled at 3：00 p．m．every Wednesday afternoon，lasting about 2 hours．（高分句型一）It is in the lecture hall that our practice will take place，which is on the third floor of the laboratory building．（高分句型二）We sincerely hope that you can turn up on time．If it is convenient for you，please recommend an English song suitable for our performance．（高分句型三）
I'm sure with our joint efforts our choir will stand out in the final competition．
Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假如你是李华，你和交流生Stephen所在的合唱队（choir）进入了决赛．请给他写一封电子邮件，告知这一信息，通知他训练的时间和地点，并让他推荐一首合唱的英文歌曲．写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确要点：2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：succeed in在…方面成功； However然而；take place发生；turn up出现，到场；on time按时；stand out 出色；
So our trai ning is scheduled at 3：00 p．m．every Wednesday afternoon，lasting about 2 hours．（高分句型一）
It is in the lecture hall that our practice will take place，which is on the third floor of the laboratory building．（高分句型二）
If it is convenient for you，please recommend an English song suitable for our performance．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Stephen，
      I'm very excited to tell you that our choir has succeeded in entering the final competition．
      However，we still have a long way to go．So our trai ning is scheduled at 3：00 p．m．every Wednesday afternoon，lasting about 2 hours．（高分句型一）It is in the lecture hall that our practice will take place，which is on the third floor of the laboratory building．（高分句型二）We sincerely hope that you can turn up on time．If it is convenient for you，please recommend an English song suitable for our performance．（高分句型三）
      I'm sure with our joint efforts our choir will stand out in the final competition．
      Best wishes．
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．