Question

【题目】第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两赴，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

With the fast development of technology, we enjoy its convenience as well suffer the troubles which we human beings can never afford to ignore.

Which is seen everywhere, people nowadays lived a life on the go with a mobile phone which make them available at any time. Otherwise , they may bend over the phone even when they are seating face to face, lacking in heart-to-heart communication. What's more, we are faced with more serious food problems which by turn contribute to more deadly diseases like cancers.

As a matter of fact, human beings are blame for all these problems. If we wish to leave our next generations a still beautiful world, we have to take actions from now on, such as stopping destroying the earth by cutting off trees.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】加as

【2】which改为 as

【3】make改为makes

【4】Otherwise改为However

【5】seating改为sitting

【6】more改为worse

【7】by turn改为 in turn

【8】加上to

【9】actions改为action

【10】off 改为down

【解析】

【1】加as.本句中as well as(也，又)可以连接两个并列的主语和谓语及宾语结构，而as well(也，又)通常位于句末，本句意为：我们享受到了科技的便利同时也受基困扰。

【2】which改为 as;根据句子结构，as可以引导定语从句，位于句首，句中或者句末，而which引导定语从句时只能位于句中或者句末。故将which改为 as。

【3】make改为makes，根据句子结构which引导限制性定语从句修饰前面的先行词a mobile phone，为单数名词，故make改为makes

【4】Otherwise改为However；根据句子结构通过理解前后两者是转折的关系，故将Otherwise改为However

【5】seating改为sitting;本句中属于用词不当，比如If you seat yourself somewhere, you sit down. 意为使 (自己) 坐下；故将seating改为sitting

【6】more改为worse；根据本句句意更加糟糕的是，我们要面临更加严峻的食物问题；what’s more表递进，另外，再者；而what’s worse：更加糟糕的是…….故将more改为worse

【7】by turn改为 in turn.其实by turn：轮流，依；in turn：反过来。本句which in turn contribute to more deadly diseases like cancers.意为：这反过来会导致更多致命的疾病。故by turn改为 in turn

【8】加上to ;构成固定结构be to blame for sth因某事而受到指责。本句意为人类应为所有的问题承担责任。故加上to

【9】actions改为action;固定短语take action 采取行动；提出诉讼；比如If business success is what you want, than you need to take action. 但是，如果你想取得商业上的成功，那你就必须采取行动。故将actions改为action。

【10】off 改为down. 本句中动词短语cut off 切掉；隔离；cut down砍倒，削减。故将off 改为down