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8.假定你是孝华,你的外国好友Tom来信说他下周将参加中文演讲比赛(Chinese speech contest).为此他感到非常紧张.请给他写封回信,内容包括:1.表示支持和鼓励;2.给出演讲建议;3.预祝成功.
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数.
Dear Tom,
I'm very glad that you'll take part in the Chinese speech contest next week,through which you can improveyour Chinese communication ability.(高分句型一)So you should take the opportunity and face it calmly.
Now I'd like to give you some suggestions.Firstly,when you stand on the platform,take it easy,as theChinese saying goes,"a good state of mind is half done."(高分句型二)What's more,keep smiling from the start and payattention to your hand gestures as body language is especially important in the speech.(高分句型三)Finally,your voiceshould remain clear and loud to reach the audience.
I believe you can make it and wish you good luck and success.
Yours,
Li Hua.

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息 假定你是孝华,你的外国好友Tom来信说他下周将参加中文演讲比赛(Chinese speech contest).为此他感到非常紧张.请给他写封回信,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,要点包括:表示支持和鼓励;给出演讲建议;预祝成功.2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:take part in 参加;Firstly首先;take it easy别着急;as the Chinese saying goes正如谚语所说;What's more而且;pay attention to 关注;Finally最后;make it 成功;
 I'm very glad that you'll take part in the Chinese speech contest next week,through which you can improve your Chinese communication ability.(高分句型一)
Firstly,when you stand on the platform,take it easy,as the Chinese saying goes,"a good state of mind is half done."(高分句型二)
What's more,keep smiling from the start and pay attention to your hand gestures as body language is especially important in the speech.(高分句型三)

解答 Dear Tom,
       I'm very glad that you'll take part in the Chinese speech contest next week,through which you can improve your Chinese communication ability.(高分句型一)So you should take the opportunity and face it calmly.
       Now I'd like to give you some suggestions.Firstly,when you stand on the platform,take it easy,as the Chinese saying goes,"a good state of mind is half done."(高分句型二)What's more,keep smiling from the start and pay attention to your hand gestures as body language is especially important in the speech.(高分句型三)Finally,your voice should remain clear and loud to reach the audience.
       I believe you can make it and wish you good luck and success.
                                                                                                                                                                                                    Yours,
                                                                                                                                                                                                   Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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