Question

20．假如你是李华．你的美国朋友 Lucy 因家庭经济困难准备辍学．请你根据以下 提示要点，给她写封信，劝她继续上学．
1．学习的重要性；2．如何面对目前的困难．
注意：1．词数 100 左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．信的开头和 结尾已经给出，但不计入总词数．
Dear Lucy，
I am sorry to hear that you have decided to drop out of school（辍学）．
I am writing to persuade you not to do that and hope you can continue your studies．（高分句型一）The reasons are as follows．
First of all，as a student，our studies must come first．To receive education at school at present will have a long-lasting influence on our future．Second，all of us will meet with difficulties in our lives and thus we must accept the challenges and try to overcome them．（高分句型二）Third，there are many ways to help you get through the present difficult situation．For example，you can apply for student loans or take part-time jobs．
There is no doubt that I will try my best to help you．（高分句型三）In short，I do hope you can take my suggestion into consideration and make a final decision．
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假如你是李华．你的美国朋友 Lucy 因家庭经济困难准备辍学．请你根据以下 提示要点，给她写封信，劝她继续上学，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：学习的重要性；如何面对目前的困难．  2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：drop out of school辍学；First of all首先；Second其次；Third第三；get through经历；There is no doubt that…毫无疑问；In short总之；Look forward to盼望；
I am writing to persuade you not to do that and hope you can continue your studies．（高分句型一）
Second，all of us will meet with difficulties in our lives and thus we must accept the challenges and try to overcome them．（高分句型二）
There is no doubt that I will try my best to help you．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Lucy，
       I am sorry to hear that you have decided to drop out of school．I am writing to persuade you not to do that and hope you can continue your studies．（高分句型一）The reasons are as follows．
       First of all，as a student，our studies must come first．To receive education at school at present will have a long-lasting influence on our future．Second，all of us will meet with difficulties in our lives and thus we must accept the challenges and try to overcome them．（高分句型二）Third，there are many ways to help you get through the present difficult situation．For example，you can apply for student loans or take part-time jobs． 
       There is no doubt that I will try my best to help you．（高分句型三）In short，I do hope you can take my suggestion into consideration and make a final decision．
       Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．