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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It doesn't matter to fail as long as you don't give up. To my opinion, it is hard to be successful. Challenges were a necessary part of your life as you grow up. And you won't necessary succeed in everything for the first time you try. That's okay. Some of the most successful people in the world are the one who've had the most failures. J. K. Rowling, wrote Harry Potter, had her first Harry Potter book reject 12 times before it was finally published. Michael Jordan was removed his high school basketball team. He lost hundreds of games and miss thousands of shots during his career. But he once said, “I have failed over and over and over again in my life. And that's because I succeed.”

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【答案】①To 改为In；②were改为are；③necessary 改为 necessarily；④for去掉；⑤one改为 ones；⑥wrote Harry Potter前加who；⑦was去掉；⑧removed 后加from；⑨miss改为missed；⑩because改为why。

【解析】本文是一篇说明文，通过列举一些例子告诉我们失败不可怕，只要我们永不放弃玖一定会成功的。
①考查固定搭配。in one's opinion固定短语“依某人看来”。故To 改为In。
②考查动词时态。全文用的是一般现在时态，所以be动词用一般现在时形式。当你长大的过程中，挑战是你生活中必不可少的一部分。故were 改为are。
③考查副词。修饰动词succeed用副词，作状语。故necessary 改为 necessarily。
④考查连词。此处the first time 表“第一次”，与“第二次、第三次......”对立,相当于一个从属连词，用于过去式或现在时。句意：当你第一次尝试的时候，你没有必要一切都要成功。故for去掉。
⑤考查代词。前面Some of the most successful people是复数，故此处应用复数ones，故one 改为 ones。
⑥考查引导词。此处是who引导的定语从句。写哈利·波特的J.K.罗琳，，故wrote Harry Potter前加who。
⑦考查动词。此处是一个完整的句子，前面已经有had做谓语了，故was去掉。
⑧考查介词。removed from固定短语“开除，除名”。句意：迈克尔乔丹被他的高中篮球队除名了。故removed 后加from。
⑨考查动词。并列句前后时态一致，前半句是过去时态，后半句也应是过去时态，故动词用过去式。故miss 改为missed。
⑩考查引导词。此处是强调结果的表语从句，故引导词用why，故because 改为why。