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2.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏子符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
I like traveling.When a holiday approach,I will careful make a plan for it.My friends like traveling either,so we always go out together.Traveling means a lot to you.First of all,every city has its own feature and lifestyle,that offers us a chance to experience diversity.By exploring these place,we can learn a lot beyond the textbook.Besides,after live in the same place and doing the same things all the way,traveling can make us refreshing.Returning back from a journey,we can be full energy again.

分析 本文主要讲述作者喜欢旅游.通过探索这些地方,可以学到书本上学不到的知识.旅游也能使我们恢复精神,精力充沛地投入到工作中.

解答 I like traveling.When a holiday approach,I will careful make a plan for it.My friends like traveling either,so we always go out together.Traveling means a lot to you.First of all,every city has its own feature and lifestyle,that offers us a chance to experience diversity.By exploring these place,we can learn a lot beyond the textbook.Besides,after live in the same place and doing the same things all the way,traveling can make us refreshing.Returning back from a journey,we can be full∧energy again.
详解:
1.approach改为approaches 考查动词时态.全文讲述的是一般事实,用一般现在时态.
2.careful改为carefully 考查副词.make是动词,要用副词修饰.
3.either改为too 考查副词.either和too都意为"",either用否定句,too用于肯定句,此处是肯定句,用too.
4.you改为us 考查代词.根据句意:旅游对我们意味着很多.用代词us.
5.that改为which 考查定语从句.分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句,先行词是前面整个句子,在从句中作主语,用关系代词which,that不可用于非限制性定语从句中.
6.place改为places 考查名词复数.place是可数名词,其前有these修饰时用复数形式.
7.the改为a 考查冠词.textbook是可数名词,单数形式前加不定冠词a表示泛指.
8.live改为living 考查动名词.after是介词,后接动词时用动名词形式.
9.refreshing改为refreshed 考查过去分词.us与refresh之间是动宾关系,用过去分词作宾语补足语.
10.加of 考查介词.be full of意为"充满",是固定搭配.

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.

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