题目内容
11.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或 修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Dear Mommy.
Happy Mother's Day!This is a special holiday because that it is a day for you to feel the appreciation for all you have done for Amy and 1.I am most thankful for all the sacrifices you had made in order for us live the most comfortable lives possible.You put yourself in difficulty situations so that we have food to eat,clean clothes to wear and a warm home to sleep in.Thank you for your endless love and hard works.Your efforts are never taking for granted.I really couldn't ask for the better mom.Through you,I am able to understand which true love is:loving someone unconditional for what they were,are and will be.
Love,
Anna.
分析 本文主要讲述作者在母亲节对母亲的感恩.感谢母亲所做的牺牲,让作者有饭吃,有干净的衣服穿和暖和的家睡觉;感谢母亲无尽的爱和辛勤的工作,也让作者明白了真正的爱是什么.
解答 Dear Mommy.
Happy Mother's Day!This is a special holiday because that it is a day for you to feel the appreciation for all you have done for Amy and 1.I am most thankful for all the sacrifices you had made in order for us∧live the most comfortable lives possible.You put yourself in difficulty situations so that we have food to eat,clean clothes to wear and a warm home to sleep in.Thank you for your endless love and hard works.Your efforts are never taking for granted.I really couldn't ask for the better mom.Through you,I am able to understand which true love is:loving someone unconditional for what they were,are and will be.
Love,
Anna.详解:
1.去掉that 考查连词.在英语中,两个分句要用连词连接,在已有because连接句子的情况下,that是多余的,要去掉.
2.I改为me 考查代词.for是介词,后接宾格代词me.
3.had改为have 考查动词时态.根据上下文语境,指到现在为止所作的牺牲.用现在完成时态.
4.加to 考查固定搭配.in order to意为"为了…",是固定搭配,后接动词原形.
5.difficulty改为difficult 考查形容词.situations是名词,要用形容词修饰.
6.works改为work 考查名词.work是不可数名词,没有复数形式.
7.taking改为taken 考查动词语态. efforts与take之间是动宾关系,用一般现在时的被动语态.
8.the改为a 考查冠词.mom是可数名词,单数形式前加不定冠词a表示泛指.
9.which改为what 考查连词.understand后的宾语从句缺少表语,用what作其表语,同时引导宾语从句.
10.unconditional改为unconditionally 考查副词.love是动词,要用副词修饰.
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.
In the west,(46)B with one finger at a person (47)A talking usually means that the person who is (48)A is criticizing the person (49)C is pointed at. (50)Dthis,men in English-speaking countries touch men much (51)B than men touch men in China.But men and women touch each other (52)D more often than men and women touch each other publicly in China.Boy friends and girl-friends often (53)A hands,embrace ( 拥抱 ) or kiss in public.Good friends often (54)D one another with a kiss (55)B the cheek,if they are women or of opposite sexes.
36.A.show | B.talk | C.speak | D.say |
37.A.lives | B.life | C.lives | D.living |
38.A.look | B.to look | C.looking | D.looked |
39.A.speak | B.tell | C.say | D.talk |
40.A.and | B.but | C.or | D.so |
41.A.what | B.that | C.which | D.where |
42.A.shake | B.shaken | C.shaking | D.being shaken |
43.A.person's | B.Englishman's | C.Chinese's | D.westerner's |
44.A.man | B.girl | C.woman | D.boy |
45.A.better | B.important | C.with | D.impolite |
46.A.point | B.pointing | C.pointed | D.points |
47.A.while | B.as | C.after | D.before |
48.A.speaking | B.hearing | C.listening | D.smiling |
49.A.which | B.whom | C.who | D.what |
50.A.However | B.Except | C.But | D.Besides |
51.A.more | B.less | C.longer | D.harder |
52.A.at home | B.outside | C.secretly | D.in public |
53.A.hold | B.touch | C.wave | D.show |
54.A.greets | B.greet to | C.greet with | D.greet |
55.A.in | B.on | C.to | D.for |
"Stop making a mess.""It's not a mess.They're(45)D.""Sorry,what did you say?"I hadn't heard him clearly.
He didn't answer me.Paul has autism(自闭症)and(46)Aanswers a question,especially when he's(47)Cattentively on something else.He ran down the stairs."Where are my other butterflies?"he asked,(48)Baround.Every time Paul (49)Bfive or more words together,my heart says a(50)Dof thanks.But lately he seems to(51)Dthat the benefits of forming complete sentences when communicating are(52)Aof the effort.
Butterflies.Of course.I rushed to(53)Cthem from the garbage,(54)Bthem off and handed them to my young artist."Want to see them(55)Dagain?"he asked with a shy smile."Oh yes!They're beautiful."I whispered.He ran back upstairs to float his(56)Adown again.They really did look like beautiful butterflies.
That day Paul(57)Ame to look up at(58)Cinstead of down at garbage.How many other masterpieces do I miss because I'm too caught up in my(59)Bto take time to appreciate what's right in front of me?Life is not what happens to us.It's(60)Dwe look at it.Now,I look up.
41.A.laughed | B.sighed | C.amazed | D.shouted |
42.A.Days | B.Years | C.Moments | D.Weeks |
43.A.called out | B.turned up | C.got in | D.added to |
44.A.up | B.down | C.away | D.off |
45.A.planes | B.papers | C.leaves | D.butterflies |
46.A.rarely | B.frequently | C.willingly | D.eagerly |
47.A.devoted | B.depended | C.focused | D.addicted |
48.A.showing | B.looking | C.playing | D.drawing |
49.A.spells | B.puts | C.pushes | D.accumulates |
50.A.sound | B.remark | C.report | D.prayer |
51.A.refuse | B.hear | C.mind | D.realize |
52.A.worthy | B.aware | C.fond | D.typical |
53.A.hide | B.destroy | C.rescue | D.remove |
54.A.tore | B.dusted | C.cut | D.seized |
55.A.throw | B.flow | C.land | D.fly |
56.A.masterpieces | B.schoolwork | C.inventions | D.imagination |
57.A.reminded | B.forced | C.intended | D.permitted |
58.A.mistakes | B.weaknesses | C.beauty | D.scenery |
59.A.amusement | B.housework | C.communication | D.homework |
60.A.when | B.whether | C.where | D.how |
The Great Wall has a history of over two (45)Ayears.People began to (46)Dthe wall(47)Athe spring and Autumn Period in Chinese history.In about 221BC Qin Shihuang had all the walls(48)D.(49)C,the Great Wall came to the world.The Great Wall is (50)D6,000 kilometers long,6-7 meters high and 4-5 meters wide.In most places it is (51)A enough for five horses or ten men to walk (52)Calong the top.It was very (53)Bto build (54)Da great wall in the old (55)A.Thousand of men (56)Bwhen they built it.The Great Wall was made not only of stones,but millions of (57)C.
Today,the Great Wall has become a place (58)Dinterest not only to the Chinese but also to people all over the world.(59)B the Egyptians feel proud of their pyramids,(60)A Chinese people also feel proud of our Great Wall.
41.A.goes | B.comes | C.lies | D.stands |
42.A.through | B.along | C.over | D.across |
43.A.and | B.from | C.to | D.through |
44.A.gets | B.reaches | C.comes | D.arrives |
45.A.thousand | B.million | C.hundred | D.billion |
46.A.create | B.design | C.form | D.build |
47.A.in | B.at | C.between | D.on |
48.A.made up | B.put up | C.sent up | D.joined up |
49.A.Since then on | B.Now and then | C.From then on | D.After then |
50.A.no more than | B.not more than | C.less than | D.more than |
51.A.wide | B.long | C.high | D.tall |
52.A.one by one | B.day by day | C.side by side | D.step by step |
53.A.easy | B.difficult | C.good | D.bad |
54.A.like | B.look | C.so | D.such |
55.A.times | B.history | C.countries | D.enemies |
56.A.killed | B.died | C.murdered | D.gone |
57.A.life | B.live | C.lives | D.living |
58.A.about | B.with | C.for | D.of |
59.A.As if | B.Just as | C.Look like | D.Such |
60.A.we | B.us | C.our | D.ours |