假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．短文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号.并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线/划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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6．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．短文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号，并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用斜线/划掉．修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
As Senior Three students，we are facing great pressure of study．How should we deal with it properly？Here is some tips．
Firstly，it is of vital important to have a positive attitude．Faced with pressure，and we should learn to turn it into our motive power．Secondly，manage your time wisely by setting up a study schedule，that can help us improve our learning efficiency．In addition，communicate with our teachers and classmates is also a good way．Last but not least，we should take a active part in sports and build up our body．Only if we are fully prepared the challenge both mentally and physically can we overcome the difficulties．
My dear classmates，keep up our courage and face the challenge brave!As long as we made our efforts，we can achieve success!

分析本文主要为高三学生介绍一些释放压力的一些建议．第一，面对压力，就压力变成动力；第二，通过制订一个学习计划来明智地管理我们的时间；第三，和老师和同学交流也是一种好的方法；最后，积极参加体育锻炼强健身体．

解答 As Senior Three students，we are facing great pressure of study．How should we deal with it properly？Here is some tips．
Firstly，it is of vital important to have a positive attitude．Faced with pressure，and we should learn to turn it into our motive power．Secondly，manage your time wisely by setting up a study schedule，that can help us improve our learning efficiency．In addition，communicate with our teachers and classmates is also a good way．Last but not least，we should take a active part in sports and build up our body．Only if we are fully prepared∧the challenge both mentally and physically can we overcome the difficulties．
My dear classmates，keep up our courage and face the challenge brave!As long as we made our efforts，we can achieve success!
详解：
1．is改为are 考查主谓一致．主语tips是复数．谓语动词也应用复数形式are．
2．important改为importance 考查名词．be+of+抽象名词，相当于be+该抽象名词的形容词形成，主要用来表示主语的性质．这一结构中的抽象名词前可用great，little，no，some，any，not much等修饰，以表示不同的程度，抽象名词常用importance，value，use等．
3．去掉and 考查连词．Faced with pressure是过去分词短语，不是句子，不需要连词and，要去掉．
4．your改为our 考查代词．根据句意：通过制订一个学习计划来明智地管理我们的时间．用代词our．
5．that改为which 考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词是前面整个句子，在从句中作主语，用关系代词which，that不可用于非限制性定语从句中．
6．communicate改为communicating 考查动名词．分析句子结构，句中缺少主语，用动名词短语communicating with our teachers and classmates作主语．
7．a改为an 考查冠词．take a part in意为"参加"，是固定搭配，因active读音以发元音开头，用不定冠词an．
8．加for 考查介词．be prepared for意为"对…有所准备"，是固定搭配．
9．brave改为bravely 考查副词．face是动词，要用副词修饰．
10．made改为make 考查动词时态．根据主句we can achieve success，从句要用一般现在时态．

点评高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

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17．The rumor proved all too bitterly true：Park's Hardware，a downtown institution of Orono for over 100years，would be closing．Locals cross-examined，and begged Lin，the owner of the store，but in vain．Running a small，local，family-owned hardware business was no longer profit-making．The town's affection for Park's Hardware was just not enough to allow it to compete against the giant warehouse stores．
I was one member of the excited masses that began to walk through Park's as，day by day，the lettering on the front window changed from"20% OFF EVERTHING"to"30%"，"40%"，and on and on，until the only things left were the light sockets （插座） and doorknobs．
Compared with giant warehouses，a hardware store is special．I recall the time I was exploring in one giant warehouse for a wireless doorbell that Park's didn't carry．I found the thing，but didn't understand the following note on the package："Red light indicates condition of the battery．""Excuse me，"I said to a clerk，holding the item out，"I can't seem to find the red light．"The man examined it，and said，"Neither can I．"I contrasted this experience with one I routinely had at Park's．"Lin，"I'd beg．"Can you …．please…I don't know …do you think？"And quicker than one would say，"little red light，"Lin would spring into action and together we'd sit down to find the solution．
I could buy a single screw （螺丝钉） at Park's．At a warehouse I have no choice but to buy a box of a hundred screws．But I don't want a box of a hundred screws when all I need is one．I just want to know the location of little red light，and now that Park's gone，I realized that I never will．

21．Why did Park's decide to stop its business？B
A．The owner invested in other business．
B．The owner couldn't make enough money．
C．Its location was not convenient for shopping．
D．It couldn't win enough affection from the locals．
22．What did Park's do before closing？A
A．It had a closing down sale．
B．It struggled for its reorganization．
C．It distributed its goods to regulars．
D．It looked for a new owner．
23．What does the writer's experience in Paragraph 3indicate？C
A．The benefit of having more choices．
B．The pressure of competition for Park's．
C．The good service of Park's．
D．The responsible working attitude of large stores．
24．What's the writer's tone in writing this passage？D
A．Humorous
B．Indifferent
C．Critical
D．Regretful．

14．A dog named Ace is being praised as a hero for licking （舔） the face of a sleeping，deaf 13-year-old Indianapolis boy to warn him that the house was on fire．Indianapolis Fire Department Officer Rita Reith said Nick Lamb was home alone and sleeping without his hearing aids （助听器） when the fire began Wednesday．
"My dog licked my face and woke me up，"Lamb said．"I was like，‘Stop it!What？You want to be fed？'I thought he wanted to be fed or go outside．"The dog didn't stop licking Lamb until the teen got up．That's when he realized the house was full of smoke．"I couldn't hear anything because I had my hearing aids off．My dog Ace smelled it，"Lamb said．"I just wanted to get out．"Without his shoes but with Ace by his side，he covered his nose and mouth with his T-shirt，and rushed out of the back door，catching one of his hearing aids along the way．He then called his mother and 911．
Lindsay Bernard，Lamb's mother，praised Ace for saving her son's life．"It's amazing，because if Ace hadn't been there，Lamb probably wouldn't have even woken up，"Bernard said．
Lamb，who was born deaf，told firemen that this was the first summer he was old enough to stay home alone and that he had returned from summer camp just three days earlier．

21．According to Paragraph 1，Nick LambC．
A．lives alone
B．is a healthy boy
C．didn't know there was a fire
D．was bitten by his dog
22．How did Nick Lamb survive the fire？D
A．Using his hearing aids．
B．With the help of firemen．
C．With the help of Lindsay Bernard．
D．Under the guidance of Ace．
23．Which of the following words can best describe Ace？D
A．Polite．
B．Careful．
C．Proud．
D．Clever．
24．What was Lindsay Bernard's attitude towards the dog？C
A．Surprised．
B．Worried．
C．Thankful．
D．Hopeful．

1．Mr．Brown，our geography teacher，________________，for his bag with maps and a globe are already on the teacher's desk．（　　）

	A．	must arrive		B．	must have arrived
	C．	can have arrived		D．	has arrived

11．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Dear Mommy．
Happy Mother's Day!This is a special holiday because that it is a day for you to feel the appreciation for all you have done for Amy and 1．I am most thankful for all the sacrifices you had made in order for us live the most comfortable lives possible．You put yourself in difficulty situations so that we have food to eat，clean clothes to wear and a warm home to sleep in．Thank you for your endless love and hard works．Your efforts are never taking for granted．I really couldn't ask for the better mom．Through you，I am able to understand which true love is：loving someone unconditional for what they were，are and will be．
Love，
Anna．

18．Some creative people see colors when they hear different sounds．Others hear voices when they see words and numbers．What they experience is called synaesthesia（通感）．
A study at the University of Sussex in the UK is finding out how to use synaesthesia to improve your IQ and memory．The study leaders Daniel Bor has been working on exploring memory for a number of years．Bor says that carrying out these tests has given them the opportunity to find out more about how we use different kinds of memory．
Bor based his latest research on something scientists already know a lot about-"chunks"．He explains that this is a way of parceling out large pieces of information into smaller units（chunks），with certain features or meanings，to make it easier to remember．"When I gave you my phone number，01274737271，you probably remember it as 012-74-73-72-71，or something similar．If you can remember 012 and then 74，you can remember the rest by its features．You can get some amazing benefits from chunks．"
In this way，synaesthesia adds extra meaningful information to things that are difficult to remember，such as letters，numbers，or colors．This helps us remember things better．"All these signs are pointing towards synaesthesia being connected to greater abilities to do certain things，certain jobs，"says Bor．"So，the study began as a way to test that．"
They wanted to see if they could create a way to learn about synaesthesia，and use its benefits to help everyone．In the study，they trained volunteers for 10minutes a day for a week．The results were not huge，but impressive．
They discovered that after training，the volunteers were able to pass the normal synaesthesia tests and their IQ jumped up about 12 points．Although Bor believes they still need to test the increase in IQ with different groups of people，the result is very impressive．"It's very useful to increases people's IQs．Even when the group are already quite clever，like the students who take part in this study．"he said．

28．Which is the best title for this passage？D
A．Synaesthesia，a Common Phenomenon
B．Synaesthesia and Chunks
C．What Synaesthesia Tells Us？
D．Synaesthesia Helps you Improve IQ
29．How does synaesthesia improve memory？A
A．Synaesthesia adds new meanings to memory materials．
B．Synaesthesia is connected to greater abilities to do certain things．
C．Synaesthesia simplifies the memory process．
D．Synaesthesia blends various methods together．
30．What does"parcel out"in paragraph 3mean？C
A．Submit．
B．Enlarge．
C．Break．
D．Arouse．
31．From the passage，Bor feelsC about the result of the test．
A．doubtful
B．worried
C．optimistic
D．uncertain．

15．The following are about modern wonders of the world．
The Suez Canal
More than 3，000 years ago，a king of Egypt ordered that a river be built to connect the Mediterranean．Sea （地中海） and the Red Sea．This kind of man-made river is called a canal．However，ancient Egyptians did not keep this canal in use．As years passed，the sands of the great deserts of Egypt closed the small canal．
In 1859，Egyptian workers began rebuilding the canal．It was opened and named the Suez Canal on November I7th，1869．Though closed several times because of war or political problems，the Suez Canal is still the fastest crossing from the Atlantic Ocean to the Indian Ocean today，saving shipping companies a great deal of time and money．
The Channel Tunnel
The great canal connects oceans．The next great wonder connects land．It is called the Channel Tunnel，or"Chunnel"，connecting Britain with France．The tunnel is 50 kilometers long，built about 45meters below the earth under the English．Channel （海峡）．
The work began in 1987 and it took seven years to finish．The cost was more than 13，000 million dollars．The Chunnel opened In 1994．
Today，the Chunnel is very busy．High-speed trains carry cars，trucks and passengers from Britain to France and back again．The trains are famous for their smooth，quiet ride．The money paid for the trip is slowly paying for the huge cost．
The Three Gorges Darn
The Three Gorges Dam is perhaps the largest construction project on earth．The work began，in 1993．The Three Gorges Dam is built to produce power and control China's Yangtze River．The completed dam produces large amounts of electric power．
Completed in 2009，the dam creates a huge lake about 632 square kilometers．Some critics say the dam harms the environment and damages historical areas．More than one million people had been resettled before the dam was finished．Chinese government officials say it will lead to increased economic development in cities near the dam，and the terrible floods caused by the Yangtze have become memories of the past．

41．Which of the following took the longest time to build？D
A．The Red sea．
B．The English Channel．
C．The Chunnel．
D．The Three Gorges Dam
42．What do we know about the effects the Three Gorges Dam has on China？C
A．It helps to protect the historical sites．
B．It saves time for ships to travel upstream．
C．It reduces the number of flood victims．
D．It powers an area of 632square kilometers．

1．The tourist bus winded its way into a mountainous area．It was（41）Dto make a turn when two passengers-a（42）Aof young lovers-were so attracted by the beautiful scenery that they43）B a stop to get down．They were left behind and the bus went（44）C．Suddenly they heard a loud boom（45）Bof the road．It was a huge rock rolling down in the landslide that hit the bus and fell with it into a deep valley．The lovers were greatly（46）Aby the news that no passengers on board（47）C．When they calmed down they（48）D and expressed their feelings in a few words．
The above story was told by a guide when we were riding a tourist（49）Dto a scenic mountain．He asked us to guess what the lovers said immediately after the disaster that they had（50）Aescaped．
Often we read reports about traffic accidents，among which there were（51）C ones who missed the bus and（52）Bthe disaster．Those people usually said with a sigh of（53）C"Fortunately I was not on board．"On our bus the passengers'（54）Cto the guide were various．
But the answer was quite out of our expectation．"If we hadn't got down and（55）B the bus，it would have（56）Bthe dangerous spot and all the passengers would have survived．"
The story passed from person to person as a sort of wit （智慧） test，but I think（57）A．It actually serves as a（n）（58）A of a person's mind．I pay my heart-felt respect to the couple who，instead of feeling lucky，（59）Bthemselves for causing the loss of lives．People all have heart for（60）D，but it is often a flashing thought across one's mind that decides wether it is good or evil （邪恶的）．

41．A．rapid	B．due	C．eager	D．about
42．A．couple	B．group	C．party	D．row
43．A．got to	B．called for	C．set up	D．looked for
44．A．away	B．in	C．on	D．by
45．A．along	B．ahead	C．across	D．opposite
46．A．shocked	B．scared	C．moved	D．confused
47．A．died	B．saved	C．survived	D．witnessed
48．A．shouted	B．screamed	C．fought	D．sighed
49．A．car	B．bike	C．road	D．bus
50．A．narrowly	B．extremely	C．hardly	D．nearly
51．A．lazy	B．selfish	C．lucky	D．strange
52．A．missed	B．avoided	C．caused	D．trapped
53．A．injury	B．concern	C．relief	D．regret
54．A．emotions	B．expressions	C．replies	D．attitudes
55．A．caught	B．delayed	C．missed	D．took
56．A．seen	B．passed	C．jumped	D．landed
57．A．differently	B．actually	C．exactly	D．sincerely
58．A．examination	B．change	C．quality	D．state
59．A．thought	B．blamed	C．enjoyed	D．helped
60．A．happiness	B．excuse	C．honor	D．mercy．

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