Question

11．假设你是某中学英文报Talks with Jamie专栏的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信．信中该名高中生诉说了自己的困扰：近日学习压力大，作业多，不得不熬夜．请根据以下内容用英文给该学生回信并提供建议．
内容要点：
1．表示理解并给予安慰；
2．指出经常熬夜的危害；
3．给出你的建议．
注意：
1．词数120左右；
2．开头与格式已为你写好，不计入总词数．
Hi，Worried，
I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment．                                   
Jamie．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，写一封回信．写作要点包括：1．表示理解并给予安慰；2．指出经常熬夜的危害；3．给出你的建议．写作时人称以第一和第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主．
重点词汇：at the moment（目前，现在）；in fact（事实上）；as we all know（众所周知）；do harm to （对…有害）；the next day（第二天）；ensure（保证，确保）；take a nap （睡午觉）
高分句型：1．In fact，the problem ①you are facing is common among senior high school students，②so you don't have to worry much．
                 ①you are facing 是一个定语从句，修饰主语the problem；②so引导结果状语从句．
                 2．Moreover，if we stay up too late，we will feel too tired and sleepy to study efficiently the next day．
                 if引导条件状语从句，从句用一般现在时，主句用一般将来时．
                 3．First of all，it's important to improve your study efficiency．
                句中it作形式主语，真正的主语是不定式短语to improve your study efficiency．

解答 Hi，Worried，
I'm so sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment．In fact，the problem you are facing is common among senior high school students，so you don't have to worry much（高分句型一）．
As we all know，lack of sleep does harm to our health．Moreover，if we stay up too late，we will feel too tired and sleepy to study efficiently the next day（高分句型二）．Therefore，we must ensure a good night's sleep．But how can you make it？Here are a few suggestions．
First of all，it's important to improve your study efficiency（高分句型三）．In this way，you can save a lot of time．Besides，why not take a nap after lunch？It helps you feel refreshed and energetic the whole afternoon．
I hope you will find my suggestions helpful．
                                                                Jamie

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意要点的提炼要全，关键短语和句型要写对，准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，还要注意人称和时态使用要正确．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，合理安排写作结构，平时注意积累词汇及语法知识．