Question

【题目】Directions: Write an English composition in 120 – 150 words according to the directions and requirements given below in Chinese.

你的朋友彼得沉迷于网络游戏《王者荣耀》(Glory of Kings)，高三了，他的成绩直线下 降，你作为他的朋友，给他写封信，谈谈你对这件事情的看法。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

I'm sorry to hear that your performance in the last simulation test was not satisfactory. What shocked me is that your performance dropped so much. I think the main culprit is your addiction to the online game—glory of the king.

As a friend, I think it's necessary to remind you that there are only three months left for the college entrance examination. I don't think you can waste any precious time on the game anymore. After all, the college entrance examination is the top priority. You should make full use of time to make preparations for the college entrance examination. As far as I know, your foundation is very good. As long as you spare no time to review, you are sure to enter the ideal university.

Yours truly.

Lihua

【解析】

本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封书信：你的朋友彼得沉迷于网络游戏《王者荣耀》，高三了，他的成绩直线下 降，你作为他的朋友，给他写封信，谈谈你对这件事情的看法。时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； Glory of Kings（王者荣耀），college entrance examination（高考），performance（成绩），simulation test（模拟考试）， main culprit（罪魁祸首），satisfactory（不尽人意的），remind（提醒），addiction（沉迷、上瘾）及top priority（头等大事）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。