题目内容
【题目】假定你是高一学生李华。暑假即将来临,为了充分利用假期时间提高英语水平,你已经制定好了一份英语学习计划。请你的美国笔友Tom写一封信,要点如下:
1.分享你的英语学习计划;
2. 征求意见;
3. 期待回复并表达感谢。
注意:1. 词数 100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom.
In order to make good use of the coming summer holiday,I have worked out a plan for my English study.Here,I'm writing to share it with you and hopefully,you can give me some advice.
As for my English studying plan,it includes mainly three aspects.To begin with,finishing every piece of homework is a must,which can help me review what I have learnt effectively. Besides,I'll set aside some time to watch at least five movies to improve my listening and speaking skills.What's more,I'd like to keep my diary in English on a daily basis.What do you think of my plan above?Would you please offer me some suggestions?
Thanks a lot. I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封信,与美国笔友讨论学习计划。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应主要为一般现在时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1.表明写信目的
2.介绍相关情况
1)分享你的英语学习计划。(sharing the plan)
2)征求意见。(asking for suggestions)
3) 期待回复并表达感谢。(expecting reply and expressing appreciation)
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
in order to; make good use of; work out; share…with; hopefully; as for; set aside; at least; suggestions; look forward to
第三步:连词成句
1. In order to make good use of the coming summer holiday,
2. I have worked out a plan for my English study
3. I'm writing to share it with you and hopefully,
4. As for my English studying plan,
5. I'll set aside some time to watch at least five movies to improve my listening and speaking skills.
6. Would you please offer me some suggestions?
7. I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience..
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改