Question

11．高中毕业在即，商丘市某高中学生会发起了高三毕业生为母校种植纪念树活动，假定你是李华，请代表学生会为这次活动写一份倡议书，内容包括：
1．种植纪念树的意义；
2．请大家为种树积极捐款；
3．表达对参加高考学生的祝愿．
注意：1．词数100左右；开头已为你写好，但不计入总词数．
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
参考词汇：纪念树--memorial trees
Dear friends，
How time flies!Now we will graduate from our beloved school．Before we leave，we should do something meaningful for our mother school．（高分句型一）Today we Students'Union call on every senior 3 student to donate some money for memorial trees in our campus．
We have lived and studied here for 3 years and many good memories will remain in our hearts for ever．（高分句型二）The memorial trees will remind us of good memories when we visit our school sometime in the future．
At last，let me give my best wishes to everyone who will attend the college entrance examination this year．（高分句型三）May everyone fulfill your dream．
Students'Union．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息高中毕业在即，商丘市某高中学生会发起了高三毕业生为母校种植纪念树活动，假定你是李华，请代表学生会为这次活动写一份倡议书．写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，种植纪念树的意义；请大家为种树积极捐款；表达对参加高考学生的祝愿．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：How time flies!时光飞逝；graduate from 从…毕业；call on 呼吁，号召；At last最后；remind sb of提醒某人…
Before we leave，we should do something meaningful for our mother school．（高分句型一）
We have lived and studied here for 3 years and many good memories will remain in our hearts for ever．（高分句型二）
At last，let me give my best wishes to everyone who will attend the college entrance examination this year．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear friends，
       How time flies!Now we will graduate from our beloved school．Before we leave，we should do something meaningful for our mother school．（高分句型一）Today we Students'Union call on every senior 3 student to donate some money for memorial trees in our campus．
       We have lived and studied here for 3 years and many good memories will remain in our hearts for ever．（高分句型二）The memorial trees will remind us of good memories when we visit our school sometime in the future．
       At last，let me give my best wishes to everyone who will attend the college entrance examination this year．（高分句型三）May everyone fulfill your dream．
                                                                                                                                                                                            Students'Union

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．