Question

2．假设你是中学生李华，6月5日是"世界环境日"，你校开展了相关志愿者活动，请给你的美国笔友Mike写一封电子邮件，介绍此次活动，内容请包括：
1．时间、地点；
2．开展的具体活动；
3．你的看法．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
3．参考词汇：世界环境日World Environment Day；志愿者的 voluntary
Dear Mike，
How is everything going？
June 5th is World Environment Day，so our school organized the voluntary activity．Let me tell you about it．
On the morning of June 5th，we gathered in the People's Square．Then，we carried out many activities．First，we performed a play about our environment，which attracted a lot of audiences．（高分句型一）After that，we gave out leaflets to passers-by to arouse people's awareness of environmental protection．In the end，we picked up the litter and cleaned the chairs in the Square．
In my opinion，the activity is really meaningful．On the one hand，all of us have learned the importance of protecting the environment．（高分句型二）On the other hand，we have not only done our part，but also encouraged other citizens to protect it．（高分句型三）
Do you have such voluntary activities？Looking forward to hearing from you．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息 假设你是中学生李华，6月5日是"世界环境日"，你校开展了相关志愿者活动，请给你的美国笔友Mike写一封电子邮件，介绍此次活动．写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：时间、地点；开展的具体活动；你的看法    2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：carry out执行，实施；give out分发；In the end最后；pick up 捡拾；In my opinion以我的观点来看；On the one hand一方面；On the other hand另一方面；not only，but also不仅，而且；Look forward to盼望；
First，we performed a play about our environment，which attracted a lot of audiences．（高分句型一）
On the one hand，all of us have learned the importance of protecting the environment．（高分句型二）
On the other hand，we have not only done our part，but also encouraged other citizens to protect it．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Mike，
      How is everything going？June 5th is World Environment Day，so our school organized the voluntary activity．Let me tell you about it．
      On the morning of June 5th，we gathered in the People's Square．Then，we carried out many activities．First，we performed a play about our environment，which attracted a lot of audiences．（高分句型一）After that，we gave out leaflets to passers-by to arouse people's awareness of environmental protection．In the end，we picked up the litter and cleaned the chairs in the Square．
      In my opinion，the activity is really meaningful．On the one hand，all of us have learned the importance of protecting the environment．（高分句型二）On the other hand，we have not only done our part，but also encouraged other citizens to protect it．（高分句型三）
      Do you have such voluntary activities？Looking forward to hearing from you．
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．