Question

【题目】感恩，是我们生活中永恒的话题。学会感恩，学会热爱生活，我们将会感受到更多快乐。假设你将参加主题为“感恩”的演讲比赛，请你根据以下要点写一篇英语演讲稿。

要点：1. 感恩对象（父母、老师、朋友…）； 2. 为何感恩； 3. 如何感恩。

注意：

1. 只能选择一个感恩对象；

2. 词数120左右。开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。

Good morning, everyone,

It’s a great honor to have the opportunity to be with you today. The topic of my speech is “Thank you,

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Thank you for listening.

Answer 1

【答案】

one possible version：

Good morning, everyone,

It’s a great honor to have the opportunity to be with you today. The topic of my speech is “Thank you, mum.”

My mum is an ordinary housewife, who devotes herself to looking after me, giving me care and encouragement. She can do everything to make sure that I can grow up healthily and happily. She keeps me company, cooks me tasty dinners, and makes my room as clean as possible. On top of that, whenever I get upset, she listens to me and comforts me until I have cheered up. I’m very grateful to have such a caring mother.

Now, I have a message for everyone here, including myself: since we have grown up, we children should try to repay our dear mum instead of always trying to receive something from her. We can help her as she helps us. Sometimes even a small talk with mum or a cup of tea for her will shine her through.

Thank you for listening.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于半开放式作文，根据提示信息来写一篇主题为“感恩”的英语演讲稿。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确要点就是主要内容。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照提示的三个方面的内容进行介绍。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该以一般现在时，第一人称为主。4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，条理清晰，句式优美，而且使用了较多高级词汇和多种句式结构。比如devotes oneself to doing sth ，to make sure ,look after , as clean as possible , On top of that , instead of

等; My mum is an ordinary housewife, who devotes herself to looking after me, giving me care and encouragement. 中使用了who 引导的非限制性定语从句；She can do everything to make sure that I can grow up healthily and happily.中使用了that引导的宾语从句；On top of that, whenever I get upset, she listens to me and comforts me until I have cheered up. 中使用了whenever和until引导的时间主语从句；since we have grown up, we children should try to repay our dear mum instead of always trying to receive something from her. 中使用了since引导的原因主语从句。