题目内容
1.假设你校正在举办感恩英语征文活动.请你根据以下提示,以My gratitude to a classmate为题,完成该短文.提示:
1.简单介绍同学的外貌2.令人难忘的事情
注意:
1.词数100左右
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
3.开头语已为你写好,不计入总词数.
My gratitude to a classmate
The classmate I should show my gratitude to is Li Hua. .
分析 本文为征文.
主题为:My gratitude to a classmate
写作要点为:1.简单介绍同学的外貌2.令人难忘的事情
解答 My gratitude to a classmate
The classmate I should show my gratitude to is Li Hua.When I was in Grade Eight,one morning,our headteacher came in with a shy boy hidden behind him.The boy was neither tall nor smart,but he had big eyes and was so lovely that we all wanted to get close to him.
Very soon we found him talented in maths,English and physics.I felt ashamed of my studies.As I was wondering whether to turn to him for advice,to my surprise,he told me that he would help me.In the following years,he really did so.Thanks to his help,I succeeded in dealing with problems and became more and more confident.
Though we're in different cities now,I do hope he can live happily.
点评 考生需了解写作要点及写作意图,合理安排写作结构,平时注意积累词汇及语法知识.
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题目 | How We can Build up a Harmonious Family |
主要特征 | 充满温暖、爱心和欢笑;相互关爱、尊重和理解 |
主要益处 | 生长在和睦家庭环境中的孩子会乐观向上 生活在和睦家庭中的父母会健康快乐 |
父母该怎么做 | 言行举止上做好表率;经常与孩子沟通交流 |
我们该怎么做 | 体谅父母的艰辛,减轻负担,主动做家务等 |
(2 )句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯.
表率:role model.How we can build up a harmonious family
A harmonious family is essential to our personal development and our physical and mental health.A harmonious family is always full of warmth,love and laughter in which parents and children not only show concern for each other bu also respect and understand each other.If a child grows up in a harmonious family,he is more likely to be cheerful and optimistic.Meanwhile,parents in a harmonious family are sure in live happily and more healthily.To create such a harmonious family parents should be rule models for their children in words and behavior and often communicate with them.As children of the family,we should show understanding for our parents'hardship,and try in share their burdens by doing housework voluntarily and so on.If you do so,our home will always be harmonious..