Question

10．高三学子要经历各种各样的考试，在考试中难免会遇到失利，这给同学们造成了很大的困扰．最近，你们在英语课上就考试失利这个问题展开了讨论，请陈述讨论的结果，内容要点如下
1．考试失利的好处（两点）
2．考试失利的弊端（两点）
3．你应对考试失利的做法．

注意：
1．短文必须包括所列内容；
2．词数120左右；
3．文章标题和开头已给出．
Failure in exams
As we all know，Senior Three students will experience various exams and it is hard to avoid failures sometimes，which greatly upset them．Recently，As we all know，Senior Three students will experience various exams and it is hard to aviod failures sometimes，which greatly upset them．（高分句型一） Recently，our class had a heated discussion about failure in exams．（提出论点）Here are the results．
We all agree that there are bothe advantages and disadvantages of failing in the exam．Generally speaking，it is widely believed that there are several positive aspects as follows．To begin with，it reminds students to devote themselves more to their studies．In addition，it helps students realize in what aspect they are weak in，thus leading them to improve．
However，some disadvantages may arise from failure in exams．Firstly，it ruins students'self-confidence so badly that some of them even no longer study hard．And secondly，teachers and parents show their dissatifaction with these students，which makes the matter worse．（分析原因）
Faced with failure in exams，what I usually do is to turn to my teachers for help．（高分句型二）They will always analyze my problems and give me some advice on how to deal with them．Their comfort and encouragement means so much to me．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
As we all know，Senior Three students will experience various exams and it is hard to aviod failures sometimes，which greatly upset them．众所周知，高三的学生会经历各种考试并且有时很难避免失败，这一点会使得他们心烦意乱．
高分句型二：
Faced with failure in exams，what I usually do is to turn to my teachers for help．面对考试中的失败，我常做的事就是向老师寻求帮助．
句型一 ①As we all know，该句是一个由as引导的非限制性定语从句，as在句中替代后面整个句子的内容
            ②which greatly upset them 该句是一个由which作先行词，在句中作主语，且替代前面整个主句内容的非限制性定语从句，此处不可以用that

解答 As we all know，Senior Three students will experience various exams and it is hard to aviod failures sometimes，which greatly upset them．（高分句型一） Recently，our class had a heated discussion about failure in exams．（提出论点）Here are the results．
  We all agree that there are bothe advantages and disadvantages of failing in the exam．Generally speaking，it is widely believed that there are several positive aspects as follows．To begin with，it reminds students to devote themselves more to their studies．In addition，it helps students realize in what aspect they are weak in，thus leading them to improve．
  However，some disadvantages may arise from failure in exams．Firstly，it ruins students'self-confidence so badly that some of them even no longer study hard．And secondly，teachers and parents show their dissatifaction with these students，which makes the matter worse．（分析原因）
  Faced with failure in exams，what I usually do is to turn to my teachers for help．（高分句型二）They will always analyze my problems and give me some advice on how to deal with them．Their comfort and encouragement means so much to me．

点评 该书面表达给出了一个观点，要求考生根据观点给出相应合理的对其的理解，最后再结合自身情况给出总结性观点．写作时应注意逻辑清晰，尽量将自己赞成的观点阐述清楚．