题目内容
【题目】假设你叫李华,今年18岁,想利用暑期打工,你在英文报纸上看到了咖啡厅的招聘广告。请根据下面的广告写一封求职信。
TEMPORARY JOB OFFER
Age 18-24
To work in busy center café.
Must enjoy working with people.
Previous experience necessary.
Good pay.
Tel. 01 222 643
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节;3. 开头和结尾已给出。
Dear Sir,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear sir,
I would like to apply for the position of a part-time waiter, as was advertised in the newspaper. I am an eighteen-year-old student studying at Senior High school.
As the summer vocation is coming, I hope to get a job to help me to gain some social experience and enrich my life. I'm available during the week so I have enough time for the work.
I once worked as a waiter for three months in a fast-food restaurant in my spare time, so I'm sure the working experience will qualify me for the position.
I'm outgoing, friendly as well as helpful, which I think will help me a lot in dealing with different customers. Besides, I can play the piano and it can surely build up a warmer and more friendly atmosphere. I would be available for an interview at any time and I look forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇要求考生,以李华的身份根据广告内容,写一封求职信,属于半开放作文。写作时要注意谋篇布局的顺序,运用合适的过渡词连接全文,同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。
【点评本篇条理清楚,要点全面,结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅,也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如:文章运用了定语从句:I would like to apply for the position of a part-time waiter, as was advertised in the newspaper.;I'm outgoing, friendly as well as helpful, which I think will help me a lot in dealing with different customers.;时间状语从句As the summer vocation is coming, I hope to get a job to help me to gain some social experience and enrich my life.,彰显了句式的变化,为文章增色不少。