Question

【题目】你发现周围很多同学在用手机发短信，玩游戏等，影响了正常学习，请针对这个现象，写一份广播稿，呼吁同学放下手机，多关注身边的人和事。内容包括：

1、简述频繁使用手机的危害性；

2、提出至少三项合理化的建议(多锻炼……)。

注意：1、词数100左右

2、开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

3、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear fellow students,

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That’s all. Thank you for your listening.

Answer 1

【答案】Dear fellow students,

Recently I have found many of us students spend too much time sending short messages or playing games on cell phones, which has negative effects on our studies and also does harm to our eyes. Worse still, we have little time to communicate with our parents and friends. Nor do we have time for physical exercise.

What shall we do to improve the situation? All of us should be fully aware of the harmful effects of frequent use of cell phones. To begin with, let's limit our time of playing with cell phones and start other hobbies. What's more, we should spend more time playing sports, which is beneficial to us. Besides, communicating with our friends is also a good choice to help us relax and get rid of the addiction. I hope that my suggestions will be of help to you.

Let’s put down our cell phones and focus on what is happening around us !

Let's take action now!

That’s all. Thank you for your listening.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一篇广播稿。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一广播稿：你发现周围很多同学在用手机发短信，玩游戏等，影响了正常学习，请针对这个现象，写一份广播稿，呼吁同学放下手机，多关注身边的人和事。内容包括：简述频繁使用手机的危害性；提出至少三项合理化的建议(多锻炼……)。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：spend too much time sending short messages（花太多的时间发送短信）；improve the situation（提高境况）；be fully aware of the harmful effects of frequent use of cell phones（充分意识到频繁使用手机的危害）；beneficial to us（对我们有好处）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。