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【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,请你给英国朋友写一封电子邮件,内容包括:

1)你们原相约7月份一同爬长城;

2)由于你自身某种原因(请说明具体原因),你无法按原计划前往;

3)表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。

注意:

1. 词数不少于50

2. 开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。

Dear Chris,

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Chris,

How is everything going?

I remember we planned to visit the Great Wall together in July but now because my left leg was injured, I cannot go with you as planned. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.

I’m sorry about it. Can I suggest that we put it off until early August? I wish you could understand.

I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文中的道歉信的书写,要求考生写一封邮件,表达对原计划的改变:和朋友去爬长城,因为个人原因不能去,而表示歉意以及询问能否把计划推迟。

第一步:审题

体裁:应用文:道歉信

时态:根据提示,时态以一般现在时为主,人称为第一人称

结构:总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求:1.阐述之前的计划

2.表达个人无法实现原计划的原因

3.表达歉意及推迟计划

第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)

plan to do, cause trouble, put off, hear from

第三步:连词成句

I remember we planned to visit the Great Wall together in July.

I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.

Can I suggest that we put it off until early August?

I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.

第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)

1.表示原因:because, The reason why …is that….

2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but,

4.表结果关系: So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,

第五步:润色修改

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【题目】 One of the most traditional British holidays is the seaside holiday. Typically, families travel to British seaside towns.

In the late 1970s, air travel became affordable for the average family, and more and more British people started travelling abroad for their summer holidays. After all, the British weather isn’t very good, even in summer.

In the 1980s and 1990s, British young people became wealthier. They started to go abroad in groups. Once at their destination they socialised with other young people and had one long party.

British holidaying habits have begun to change, however. The UK now has a warmer climate than before, so people don’t always feel they need to go overseas. Also, the world seems a less certain place as interconnected economies (经济) rise and fall, which means that the cost of foreign holidays is less predictable than before. The domestic (国内的) tourism industry — when people go on holiday in their own country — is healthier than it has been in decades. UK newspapers have even invented a new word: a “staycation”.

In some ways, therefore, the UK has come full circle. There is now an increased appreciation among Britons for the diversity of the UK. It is not just the geography, which ranges from the flat fens (沼泽) of East Anglia to the valleys of Wales to the mountains of Scotland, which is diverse. And it is not just the diversity of climate-based activities on offer, which range from surfing in the warm southwest of England, to hillwalking and skiing in the north, it is also the diversity of the cultures in the UK that is beginning to be of interest to domestic tourists. People forget sometimes that there are different accents, languages, traditions, cuisines and peoples across all the parts of the UK.

1Why do more British people take their holidays in their own country?

A.The Internet makes them closer.

B.They are wealthier and more sociable.

C.The global climate is getting much warmer.

D.The expense on foreign holidays is unsteady.

2What does the underlined word “staycation” in Paragraph 4 refer to?

A.A vacation spent at home.B.A healthier style of living.

C.A new way to spend holiday.D.A fashionable tourism industry.

3Which is the best heading that matches Paragraph 5?

A.Flights of fancy.B.Sun, sea and sand.

C.The length and width.D.Footloose and fancy-free.

4What’s the purpose of the author in writing the passage?

A.To prove the UK has diverse scenery.

B.To show the UK starts to discover itself.

C.To tell the development of the United Kingdom.

D.To explain why the British spend holidays inland.

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