题目内容
【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,请你给英国朋友写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
(1)你们原相约7月份一同爬长城;
(2)由于你自身某种原因(请说明具体原因),你无法按原计划前往;
(3)表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。
注意:
1. 词数不少于50;
2. 开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
How is everything going?
I remember we planned to visit the Great Wall together in July but now because my left leg was injured, I cannot go with you as planned. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.
I’m sorry about it. Can I suggest that we put it off until early August? I wish you could understand.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文中的道歉信的书写,要求考生写一封邮件,表达对原计划的改变:和朋友去爬长城,因为个人原因不能去,而表示歉意以及询问能否把计划推迟。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文:道歉信
时态:根据提示,时态以一般现在时为主,人称为第一人称
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1.阐述之前的计划
2.表达个人无法实现原计划的原因
3.表达歉意及推迟计划
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
plan to do, cause trouble, put off, hear from
第三步:连词成句
I remember we planned to visit the Great Wall together in July.
I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.
Can I suggest that we put it off until early August?
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表示原因:because, The reason why …is that….
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but,
4.表结果关系: So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改