题目内容
【题目】假如你是在美国一所高中就读的中国交换生李华,不慎遗失校图书馆的书籍 Adventurers in对此深表歉意。请根据以下要点给校图书馆写一封电子邮件。
1.表示歉意。2.给予解释。3.你的打算。
注意:
1、词数 100 左右; 2、适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3、格式已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I am awfully sorry to tell you that I have lost the book I borrowed from your library last week.The name of the book is Adventurers in Deserts.
I read it every evening and had intended to finish it the following week,but unfortunately yesterday when I came back to my room, it was nowhere to be found. I tried to find it but I failed.I really had no idea what to do with it ,but I promise to pay for the loss of the book.I know money cannot cover the loss and it is I who am to blame.This is also a waming ot me ot be careful in the future.I will pay a visit to you on Thursday afternoon to talk over the compensation for the missing book.
I apologize again for any inconvenience or trouble that might have been caused by my carelessness.Definitely, such a thing will never happen again.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】试题分析:本文是一篇电子邮件,叙述的是在美国一所高中就读的中国交换生李华,不慎遗失校图书馆的书籍 Adventurers in对此深表歉意。认真阅读前面的提示,认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系,然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲,列出要点,并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力,灵活运用英语知识,采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用,主次分明,详略得当,语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展,按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【亮点说明】
本文是一篇电子邮件,采用三段式,格式正确,内容符合要求,同时文中使用高级句子。I am awfully sorry to tell you that I have lost the book I borrowed from your library last week.宾语从句和定语从句完美结合在句中;when I came back to my room, it was nowhere to be found.when引导时间状语从句;I really had no idea what to do with it ,but I promise to pay for the loss of the book.并列句中含有what引导的同位语从句;it is I who am to blame.此句是强调句;I apologize again for any inconvenience or trouble that might have been caused by my carelessness.句中使用定语从句。