Question

【题目】假定你是学生会主席李华，为促进语言学习与文化交流，你校计划与英国丁克洛斯中学（Dean Close Senior School）进行图书交换活动。请给校园英文报拟一封倡议书，建议大家踊跃捐赠图书。

要点如下：

1.表达捐书目的；

2.说明图书要求；

3.说明捐书地点（图书馆301房间）和截止日期（4月23日）。

写作要求：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear students,

I am writing to announce a plan of our school.

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Thank you for your cooperation!

Students’ Union

Answer 1

【答案】Dear students,

I’m writing to announce a plan of our school. Our school, together with Dean Close Senior School in England, is working on a book exchange project. Both sides are to benefit a lot from this activity. For one thing, students from the two schools will have access to more authentic reading materials, which are good for their language learning. For another, it will help promote culture communication between the two countries.

Besides, I have to state that all the books exchanged during this activity come from our students. So I hope you can donate some books with simple stories, which can help the British students learn Chinese. Also, books on the Chinese culture are welcome. All the books should be donated to Room 301 of the school library before April 23rd.

Thank you for your cooperation!

Students’ Union

【解析】试题分析：本次作文要求写一封倡议书，建议大家踊跃捐赠图书。要点如下：1.表达捐书目的；2.说明图书要求；3.说明捐书地点（图书馆301房间）和截止日期（4月23）。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，可以适当增加过渡语句，以使行文连贯。同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，特别注意在选择句式时要富有变化。

写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：文章运用了定语从句which are good for their language learning.及which can help the British students learn Chinese.和have access to及promote culture communication等词汇。